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.:Ted Bundy:. Peep This.....
Topic: one story of Ted Bundy She was not asleep, as her roommates had thought they approached the bed of Joni Lenz she laid distraught a pool of blood that was seeping from her head and face. The bed rod had disappeared without a trace Homicide, is the only thought runnin through their mind They slowly removed the covers only to find… the rod had been torn away from the bed like a lever And viciously rammed into her newly college beaver. ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Joni was moved to the hospital as she lay in the coma Her friends now had permanent hospital aroma Shes got brain damage that’ll be the rest of her life But shes lucky, the rest got cut with the butcher knife Ted Bundy, reigned on all through the seventies And more women fell, for his precise expertise Joni and plenty more countless fools Fell for his tricks, they were promised more than jewels How many you ask? Not enough he could crave That number is a number, Bundy takes to his grave ^^^^^^ True Story |
i spit this in seriously liek 15 minutes, so take it easy.... but give some feedback on this........
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yo this is dope!!
Your flow is nice, you have good rhyme's in it. Your structure is good.Good use of word's. nice drop.. keep them coming.pz |
yupp good job ILL.. this is the reason i voted u rookie of month... nice drop keep this shit coming...
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how could she b rookie of the..wat eva, ur shit was tite i like it. good shit
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he nominated me for rookie of the month........ uppin for feedback....
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yo man that was so damn good dawg.,..keep writting it makes sens
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uppin for some feedback on this shit......
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