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badgurl3136 10-02-04 01:58 AM

Why do i wake-up?
 
my eyes open and light shines through
look outside and see the dew
it a new day, just the same as the rest
everyday seems to be the same so there is no best
go to school and be told what to do
come home from practice and call my boo
listen to my friend problems and wish i would die
so i'm forced to lay and bed and cry
after 3 years my dad said he'd come get me if he had a chance
when i opened the door didn't know who he was with a 1st glance
now my friend come to me and says she has a problem with drugs
I don't know what to do, this isn't something that can be fixed with hugs
I walk into school with confidents and a smile on my face theres no doutb
I'm Kali Nicole Tichenor, gossip queen, i know what everythin is about
So while I look at myself as F-U-C-K-E-D
i have every1 lookin up to me
i'm 14 years old and it seems like i have the world on my shoulders
sumtimes I brake down and cry, thats when a fall because of the boulders
then i reliezed if u make 1 person happy then 1 will be mad
Then i jus want to choke people, vilonce is the answer, i was taught from my dad
so here i am with a fake smile, fake emotions, and fake life, I guess that make me fake
so why do i get everyday and start over when i wake?

Kawn Flixx 10-02-04 01:15 PM

nice ma


I liked it ma jus structure it betta
cuz it drives crits away if it aint layered

u 14 too??????
hiphop couple!!!!....lol

PC-

Technical 10-02-04 10:59 PM

dat shit was good. u got mad talent. yo y niggaz sleepin on dis shit, uppin^^^^^^^^

Technical 10-02-04 11:00 PM

yo mayb we can battle

.Judicial. 10-03-04 11:05 AM

that was sum good shit....u could of had a better closer tho...but dat was sum good shit...lookin forward to see some more of ur shit gurl....

Adam 10-03-04 11:10 AM

not to shabby...


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