Krown the King vs ~mental~kid~
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

due in 3 hours

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-02-04 at 02:58 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

~mental~kid~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 11:58 AM.

Krown the King has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 12:01 PM.

yo smak ya face n put it in mud this is gonna be good
ur like a gay hood lookin like shit not mud
break u nose n u playin with ur hoes n those
no1 like u with u old n manky toes
this is a ounches ill break u jaw so u cant munch
i wish u wud die go to hell n tel u got a punch
to ya face u a disgrace to this rappers race
u like mase shit as im gonna win i rest my case
die die die u gonna get ripped thats no lie
u fuckin cunt u need a broken bck n i *

* will do it

i gotta 'unleash~wrath' to a white bitch w/ blue 'eyes' and brown hair/
when i spread my 'dieses~fast', what if he 'dies'? would any1 even care?/
remember vanilla 'ice' no1 cared when he left, it will 'happen' to this "mental" pateint/
should have thought 'twice' b4 fightin da king now im 'snappin',
shit, this "kid" life is wasted/
from the squiggly in his 'name' to hide 'shame' of his scrambled words hes "calls~a~verse"/
decision was made from first 'line' if first 'time' he found out when he "fall~it~hurts"/
look motha fucka, you got to understand that my lyrics got lil jon yellin ohh~kay/
"ohh cheer up, but you shold quit becuz next to me youd neva be famous someday"/

uppin yo verse

game over.....


uppin

Voted For: Krown the King

yo i think krown won dis battle, because he had the better flow however ur struvture needs more work, but ur punches were harder dan mental's
mental u werent as good as krown because ur verse was not as complete
v/krown

uppin..............dis................shit........ ...
pz out
good luk

Uppin..................
We need votes people..............

why th fuck aint no one votin i murdered this kid just put you won

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Voted For: Krown the King

King got this battle......... took it with punches...... even though most were stretched.... he at least threw punches in this battle where as the opponent did not.........

better verse than the last battle i peeped though...... stay up dogg

'easy'



return the favor.
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Voted For: Krown the King

vote in the king,
structure was way better,
flow, shit yall he actually had one
punches were decent{fuck that whyte joke though man}
and you had some aight multies

uppin damn........................................

This was feedback posted for Krown the King
 

weak battle... nuff said