Notorious Verses vs lantis the great
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-02-04 at 09:32 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

lantis the great has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 09:26 PM.

Notorious Verses has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 09:29 PM.

hurry up wit ya verse dawg, imma spit in a little bit

yo its the fall season for the world and u on smach , have you on the ground face brown and green like grass, you's an ass not ready for dis beating im deleriving ,this battle is like winter have you cold and shriving

yo sound like he froze,thats y your own people bet aganist you like pete rose, im the best i can understand , that y when we play ball u on the bench im their starting man

Ya Self Esteem Is Gone, Courage Is Applauded, Bravery Acknowledged
U Give Pleasure, But I Kill Hoes, And Newbies Like U Of Course I Abolish
Your First Post, I Know U Feel Special Like Losin Ur Virginity
Vagina's Closed, Now Its Exposed, And U Feel Da Need To Show Explicity
Lantis Da Gay, Barely Dickrides MTV Like Sway
My Punches Leave Ur Ass Confused Like An Immigrant Ridin Da Subway
I Use My Time Wisely, Think Of My Finishers, And Closin Statements
No Offense, But My Punch Will Give U Alheimers Like Ronald Reegan
My Flow Is Redic, Sick, But In A White Man's Words Its Splendid(I Aint Racist)
Dawg Have Sum Dignity, Cuz Ur Career Was Ceased Faster Dan Tyon Ended!

Voted For: Notorious Verses

Um.....do I really need to explain this? Lantis didn't even have any punches. Hell, he didn't even have a verse. What am I supposed to be judging? Notorious wasted lines on this shit.

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yeah. Return the love to one of the battles in my sig.

Voted For: Notorious Verses

one sided battle

notorious got this in every aspect, flow,punches, everythin, lantis, u gotta make your verses bigger with more and harder hitting punches, yours were VERY weak, no hate but jus elevate, good luck

peace

^lantis lol you messed up your verse, put everythin into that first box, not the second

return the fav on my battle up anyone, HONEST vote, dont vote if you dont like me or i didnt vote for u or somethin thanks peace

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...80&page=1&pp=15

This was feedback posted for Notorious Verses
 

Lyrics:nv
Vocab:nv
Lenght:nv
Punches:nv

Yo Dawg U Got Da Dude Hard Cuz U Was Givin Him Hard Punches U Know What I Mean. Nice Shit U Dropped, Lantis Busted Some Nice Verse Too But He Just Didn't Get U As Much As U Did To Him.

Voted For: Notorious Verses

obviously notorious got this. better punches but his are wack his verse actually flowed... and he actually attempted a battle... so im gonna have to vote notorious

Voted For: Notorious Verses

nice bars dawg... coulda been a lil better, jus fix a few shit up and u good.... I don't know wat lantis was thinkin when he wrote them weak ass lines... If u gon' make it short at least spit fire.... This was a no contest... Verses win hands down

Voted For: Notorious Verses

damn lantis the great.....you suck.....go to that tips forum or somethin cuz you suck.....NV got this in every category.....no explaining needed...
v/N.V