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AutoMATIK™ 10-02-04 10:30 PM

Simplicity Is Key ...
 
My rhymes realease venom in a rhymthimic flow
I rip niggas lyrically, but the outcome is to sicknin to show
Come around my place next , a quick blow will leave yo face hexed
Cuz i clap stuff that'll leave you wrapped up like safe sex
Can u handle em ? i eat niggas im known as the child hannibal
... Im a beast 'cuz i bare arms like wild animals
Im a legend, and utterly the illest underground discovery
My Force keep me high ... therefore all other is under me
Im paintin a picture perfect precise precision when i slice incisions
With Murderious encisions to send niggas into death coarse collisons ...

shit just a quick key. i dont have an open mic on rapverse,so i just whipped somethin up ...

feedback ...

AutoMATIK™ 10-03-04 01:27 AM

ya'll sleepin ...

Abraxas 10-03-04 11:59 AM

helpin it unsleep.. nice shit you shud take more time to it....

AutoMATIK™ 10-03-04 03:27 PM

ill post a more thought out open mic soon ... but for now ... lookin for more feedback ...

EastCoast 11-01-04 10:04 AM

it was good, should take more time on it though, the last two lines was killa


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