poison vs SenesIzIt
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

verse do no more than one hour after drop

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-02-04 at 11:41 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

SenesIzIt has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 11:12 PM.

poison has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 11:21 PM.

i'll win this battle with no risk//
leave a hole through ur centre like a compact disk//
the fact is u need some more practice//
somebody crack his jaw b4 I crack his//
with a brass nuckle//
cuz id love to see yo ass strugle//
whatever votes u get imma get double//
if u front, i'll pull the tech and squeez//
im unexpected like a sneez//
cool as a light breeze//
im not just spitten, im poison spitten//
u probably give more head than the boys in prison//
yo i'll make u fall like a dry leaf//
im known to hit meat so dont start beaf

you shouldnt have called me out...knowin that yer as soft as tits

after this ima have you reachin for a bra...like a topless bitch

with hips that switch...how in the fuck can you say yer a man

with the same fuckin name as a long haired eighties band

when i pull out my nuts...just open up and say aah

as i expose yer guts with these blades from my chainsaw

put yer blood on ice...sip it as i eat yer spleen

you coulodnt spit hot with a match and a mouth full of gasoline

Voted For: poison

voted for poison
close battle but i had to give it to poisen
poisen's best line
im not just spitten, im poison spitten//
u probably give more head than the boys in prison//
SenesIzIt's best line
with hips that switch...how in the fuck can you say yer a man

with the same fuckin name as a long haired eighties band
funny shit there

but poisen had more flow

alright alright...im one down...still uppin though...




uppin

Voted For: SenesIzIt

Verse: you shouldnt have called me out...knowin that yer as soft as tits

after this ima have you reachin for a bra...like a topless bitch

with hips that switch...how in the fuck can you say yer a man

with the same fuckin name as a long haired eighties band

when i pull out my nuts...just open up and say aah

as i expose yer guts with these blades from my chainsaw

put yer blood on ice...sip it as i eat yer spleen

you coulodnt spit hot with a match and a mouth full of gasoline
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whack battle ... both verses was lacking with punches.
there were NO personals and whack methaphors ...

but the overall winner goes to this guy ^
His punches hit slightly harder ...

upiiinnnnn fffffoooooooooorrrrrr votes
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This was feedback posted for SenesIzIt
 

yo i tol u i wanted to battle u cuz of u i lost 2 battles. i aint even noe we had da battle nigga. so anyway lets battle

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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^just Uppin again^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuk
whats wrooonnng with u ppl
we need some dammmmnn votes!!!
are u all dead or something

alright we need to get this shit over with....it really aint that hard to vote....you just look at the two verses and then the one that you think is better, thats the one you vote for....i mean damn....isnt that the reason you joined this site?....to get feedback on your shit and your battles voted on....well us too....show some loyalty to yourself and vote....that is all....1

Voted For: SenesIzIt

vote goes to SenesIzIt, poison, your flow was what let you down, punches were ok but your flow needs work!!!
SenesIzIt you had nice flow, and some good and original punches, last line was nice.....
put yer blood on ice...sip it as i eat yer spleen
you coulodnt spit hot with a match and a mouth full of gasoline

well done, vote goes to SenesIzIt

please return the favour