optimized vs Notorious Verses
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no bull-shit votes


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-03-04 at 12:04 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

optimized also loses due to going over 10 lines

Notorious Verses has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-03-04 11:37 AM.

dawg check in, u was harrasin me to check in, now u check in

optimized has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-03-04 11:44 AM.

Optimized, U Will B Victimized, Cuz Its Hoes Like U I Despise
Dawg As U Demise, My Skills "RISE", I Had To Emphasise
I Create Illusions, Pump It Up Like Infusion, And Levitate
Im Four And Two, Wit Two Knockouts, Now Do U Fit My Resume?
Dawg Ur Ego's Bruised, Im Da Seargeant I Rip Out Ur Membrane
Leave U Wit No Communication, Have U Contaplatin, Ur Return Like MJ
Dis Da Playoffs, And Like Da Yankees Dawg Im Always Clinchin'
Votin Wise, Ill Blow U Out Faster Dan Team USA In Da Olympics
Niggaz Say If U Battle More Dan 5 Times U Banned, I Don Believe Dat Superstition
In Terms Of Losses, Im Like Jason Kidd Cuz Im Always Dishin'

aite i dropped my verse now drop yours dawg don punk out

yo dawg 3-0 is knockout aite, so juss keep dat in mind

u couldnt "R.I.P" a verse if ya tear it apart N berried it
ya skill's theres no compairing it, da way u put face's down like a scary clit
skill's is what u'r requiring, verbal weapons what i'll be fireing
fall back N retier-man, ya time like low battery's soon to be expiering
i'll slash ya tee fucking with me aint likely cuz u'll get merked kid
cuz i'll murder u with a quick flash -shot's, till u see the picture perfect
my flow something ya want, so kid never miss-a-tape
battle i'll partisapat, so when i spit i'll make sure these bars hit ya face
the hoster's aint strong enough the gat i'll rip-ya-waist
dog-stop-it, my flow toxit like its mix with chemical-waste
these quick keys hit visously, geting in ya skin but outta ya bones
it aint hard taking u out like a quick-pee, that'll have u with holes the size of the ozone

it was a freestyle

Voted For: Notorious Verses

Word, notorious defintley clinched this, pretty good multiples, personalls were a bit generic but thats straight. Wordplay was there, nice similies good drop.

optimized, even though it was a freestyle, you didnt have any multiples and the flow wasnt that great either, your bar lengths didnt match up, keep elevating nice try
peace

upp'in come on ya dont sleep my shit was a free hes probley was pre-written

uppin fo da last time on my battle, and it was free as well

Voted For: Notorious Verses

close one here, flow-notorious,stayed a little more together, optimized did good too no hate it was together but not as much as notorious's verse

punches/personals-notorious,both kinda sounded like they were open mics or just sayin what they would do to the person instead of launching personals at each other but thats ok both did good here, notorious seemed he was launching more threats and had harder hitting punches then optimized but optimized did good here as well this was a close aspect

creativity-optimized, thought he had different things more creative then notorious verses

vocab and multies-both did good on vocab and multies but i think notorious got this, notorious had a lengthier vocab and most of his lines had good multies in them, even though optimized did also notorious had multies that were at a higher vocab level

no hate on nobody both did good

good luck peace

Voted For: Notorious Verses

i think yall coulda came harder. but notorious came a lil harder n his flow was nice. he had sum pretty good punches in there 2. his vocab was pretty tight to so...
vote=notorious

Voted For: optimized

Ok, this was close because honestly all you kids had were structure and multis. Punches were few and far between, and when they arised they didn't really hit hard. But even though they didn't hit hard, optimized's hit harder. Notorious had the upper hand on vocab, but where optimized had a lil', he made it work quite well, breaking it down to have it fit together was a nice touch.
Vote - optimized

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Voted For: Notorious Verses

notorius verses,
good structure elaborate rhymes scheme with multies to induce good flo..not great punches but u had some that connected no doubt about it..u won easily..
optimized,
pretty horrid structure,
u had multies but not very many at all..ur punches were weak and almost childish..just all around not a winning verse in this battle not really close..notorius took its easily