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Two_Bit vs Infector Mindz
Battle Rules:
10 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Feeding YOu Challenged You Spit First Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-08-04 at 12:45 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Two_Bit has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-03-04 12:51 PM.
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Infector Mindz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-03-04 12:53 PM.
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Why u have to fool wit,the new kid,the euclid//
Saluted?,Commuted,More like Polluted,Your I audio I Muted// I'm vestid and nested to get ya mind infected// Why you protectin and neglectin,thought you Gay,u r,Iight Just Checkin// Who you messin,ammount to lessin,you still protesting?// Bustin ya brain fragment,to the pavement,theres no further extent// Not Unment,Worth 25 cents like Safeway select,I smell the Pussy Scent// You Dead Beat,Talkin about a drum beat,but loves the taste of concreit// Time to deplete,you not complete,rhymes bald ass like buckwheat// Always of yoself Full like WholeWheat,Time To Street Sweep// iight bushwack,outplayed like a-tracks,this ainta hard task// The Tactical Rap That Tackles you Back is somethin your ass lacks// |
You're from Shelton - that sounds like a name
Son i doubt you'll ever get any fame But whenever I go places people know i came Unlike you where they think its a shame You call yourself JKING but that dont sound right It dont have no ring to it, see ya cant beat me in dis fight When we done you gonna be running, runnning outta sight Spare your girlfriend? Nah. Your momma i MIGHT Ya see son, I'm out. sayonara, bye Watch these votes fly for me like firecrackers in tha sky |
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Voted For: Infector Mindz
this went one way i mean I.mindz flow was better in ever aspect each line hit hard punches was well droped and effective vocab was good wordplay decent diss was good and i was feeling ya verse two_bit u should of battle me man u wasnt ready for someone above ya level im still elevating as-well we should battle but u need to work on ya punches they was weak or really not even there or noticeable if u tryed on one flow was basic creativeness i saw none basicly that verse was effortless try harder and battle me no hate just the honest truth vote: I.mindz |
iight i'm uppin...1-0 lets get sum votes now.....come on now lets get osme votes we need some plz...get the typin.... :thumbup:
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Voted For: Infector Mindz
Infector Mindz had attempt punches nice vocab alrite flow overall it was ok need a lil more elevation Two_Bit u selfglorify tooooo much stop talkin bout yo self talk about da other guy and atleast add vocab metas punches and wordplay 2 yo flow it was weak n basic |
Voted For: Infector Mindz
Ok, Infector took this easily. He came with better structure, harder punches, ad some pretty good multis also. Two_Bit, I can understand you're new, but you gotta elevate. but keep at it and you'll get better, no hate. And Infector, you gotta start battling cats more on your level... Vote - Infector Mindz Don't pay any attention to the link in my sig, just vote here: Return the favor, honest explained votes only... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=153045 |
iight cool thanks fam for the votes i'm uppin now 3-0 lets get it over..and yea i didn't know that it was gonna be that easy :thumbup:
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Wow.You spit a nice verse Infector, and probably took me.
However, i am proud of what I spit, and thats what matters over winning. *Bump* |
Voted For: Infector Mindz
infector mindz came way harder his stucture is fucked up but he still has nice vocab whitch makes you sound like yer a underground rappar i liek that, just like me:D but he had also some pretty nice wordplay and punches but needs a lil work on wordplay but still nice a few multis nice verse dawg.... VOTE: infector mindz return the favour on my battle verse mc_phela links in the sig aight peace |
This was feedback posted for Infector Mindz
Ight...I liked Infector's verse cos it was harder hitting then two_bits. the flow was nice n the punches were decent
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Voted For: Infector Mindz
Aight First of All both Rhymes we're kinda wack on some parts.... i say Infector Mindz had dat 1... he had a good Structure, openin verze good came a lil bit weak on some lines he didn't came dat hard but good... Two_bit Kinda of a Short Verze there's not enough lines or punchlinez to tell where at who u we're comin at good structure didn't come dat hard but good... openin verze good u need it a lil bit of work on your verze though it was good..keep at it... ye so da vote goes 2 infector |
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