optimized vs lyriclord
 

10 - 20 lines

no feedin, bitin, etc.



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-04-04 at 04:44 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

lyriclord has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-03-04 05:10 PM.

aight so here goes ...

Jus like your name your shit is optimized, but its still wack,
Im not gonna be harmed at all by your shitty verbal attack,
Why bother to battle, soon your record will be the worst ever,
Rhymes are weak and your punch lines aren’t very clever,
Probably on every rap site available and never got a win,
After gettin knocked out in this battle you gonna have chagrin, (extreme embarrassment)
If you ever learn to rap properly then come back for another battle,
You’ll think you would win bout I doubt that, how fuckin prattle, (foolish)
So these lines have just beat you, killed and murdered your noob ass,
probably got another wack record, like nate dogg, probably his alias.