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Artemis 10-03-04 05:48 PM

ON FIRE REMIX-SPuL, TRIPLE_N PEEP!!!!!
 
www.soundclick.com/spulakareckless

1st verse-SPuL
2nd Verse- Triple_N

I looped verses of track wit my loopin' skills. :D


aiight. weerd. pc

JPoll 10-03-04 05:56 PM

good shit...break down...

spul...your flow was better...quality was pretty good, better then most, i like your voice, cept you need to pronounce words a little bit more, i know your style and stuff, just pronounce a tad more...nice drop though, liked the multies, honest lyrics...good shit, vocals coulda been a tiny bit louder

triple n...well done as always, loved the first 4 bars...multi world in that bitch...fell off beat once, besides that nice as fuck...i like this voice more, more of a clean style...you've had better flows...q diss especially, but it was fire...that's fo real...

peace

Kingz 10-03-04 06:07 PM

that shit was tighter than a tight rope

good job.

spul u need a lil more huskyness in ur voice, jus a lil to distinguish it from the beat. triple already got that on lock down. his voice has developed a lot which has help his flow.

lyrically it seem like u sacrificed tight lyrics for multi's, but it work well here.

all round good shit

Artemis 10-03-04 06:39 PM

aiight, I'll work on my huskyness, lol, but yea, thanks for feed. My outro part was rushed so it might sound wack, but meh. lol But yea, I did focus more on multi's though. But yea, uppin'

fluidmoon 10-03-04 08:40 PM

wow, you both did great on this..lol, spul,,,man, nice shit,,you sounded good, i just had a hard time understandin some words, but yo, you and triple tore this shit up, the commentary was funny, great job guys

Tha Q 10-03-04 10:06 PM

Spul...u already know why I said I won't peep this.

Artemis 10-04-04 11:30 AM

aiight... uppin

Tha Q 10-06-04 05:41 PM

I love this beat. However, I don't like when people keep the original chorus and just flow over it. That's tacky.


neway...Spul...ur vocals were too low...I could barely hear you


Triple...I see you're using more multis now...it fits you


good chemistry in this joint...


lyrics decent to good on both ends


not bad homies



Please return the favor when my new joint drops...


holla!

Key... 10-08-04 04:55 AM

Vocals could been betta.............SpuL could be ^^Triple had nice...multie's.......went wit the beat overall ya'll did a good job


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