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Complicated
why is life so hard isn't anything easy how hard is it for anything in this world to please me females always say i'm a player, some call it sleezy unstable right now with a shaky life, not even a gun would freeze me it's just that hard struggling through life i thought i paid my dues, but continue to still go through strife ya done heard my story before, the same old horror movie ya niggaz can take shots but u still can't bruise me * i see tits while ya niggaz on a kid level still seeing boobies i'm down with my girl now but still get offers from groupies i type all my shit up, u won't see nothing on loose leaf holding my temper back but wanting to kill these niggaz like bruce lee scenario don't never trust a ho cause now i'm hot but the other day i was goofy and not to mention they thought i was ugly but now ho's be pushing they niggaz aside just to try and hug me don't try to budge me cause that 45. on ya waist won't even nudge me even the littlest shit now starts to bug me i don't know what is but niggaz always want beef dog but half of them ain't on my level they still playing leap frog and yea i'll admit i got a problem with the world cause i've lost alot if my life had a price on it trust me that it would sure cost alot only time most of these niggaz deal with heat is when they reach across a pot and most of them probably done lost they spot so they continue to hate cause i still floss alot but i'm not conceided u could call it over confident and i got pride but trust me none of ya niggaz is stomping it *mistah tate took a shot at me in an open mic |
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This was good,
Started good and ended good Could have been a lil better but, nice use of words and shit The boobies line was funny Peace |
nice man yer best probably ive heard man... 7.8/10 gettin better man keep it up check out my open mic when we meet the links in the sig aight ~1~
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Look I Got a plot bright and bazaar
Switch on and off like spotlights on a car See major behavior and Flow flavor so recognize Best you all do me a favor oblige and correct your eyes Liking acts that be striking facts like Encyclopedias |
yo madrapper u aint gota rym evry response, um yo dis was a pretty solid piece dawg a 7.5/10, man you cuda gone harder though but u definatly got yo point across nice drop dawg n keep postin dat hot shit, hit my open mic up "cruelty" iite -1-
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