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Mind Games
Mind Games it's hard to think or act on things at the same time.. with mixed emotions -n- peer pressure going through your mind.. friends tellin you one thing, your family telling you another.. it's hard to choose,loose your family or your friends? it'll only get tougher.. shit is starting to get crazy people starting to go farther then normal actual things like real emotional family arguments.. fueds for so many stupid reasons like not obeying.. listening to your mind , -n- not what your parents are saying.. doing stupid shit without thinking about it.. sometimes wishing that your brain,you lived with out it.. being able to control your mind constantly i doubt it.. sometimes expressing your anger and start to shout it you no longer know what to think and your going insane.. untill you realize you messed up then start crying in pain.. over all the stupid shit you did over something stupid and lame.. iguess thats what happens when you start playing mind games.. |
valor=poetry at it's finest nice job...uppin this....
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thanx man
uppin |
its like this apocolypse VALOR=Crhymeful Emotions=Crhyme Sindicate=The Absolute Best......stay up valor.....gud shit
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fo sho man ;)..
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nice poem, you have a very expressive vocabulary, i was really feeling this piece, keep droppin.......1
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thanx gurl.....
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uppin this poem
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That was a lot better then some of your other stuff. It had meaning explaining a persons psychology and leading double lives and lying.
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yeah i liked dis poem i kno wats it like wen dat happens good vocab also your rhymes isnt simple like alotta people got theres keep doin yo thing playa
......fav part...... you no longer know what to think and your going insane.. untill you realize you messed up then start crying in pain.. over all the stupid shit you did over something stupid and lame.. iguess thats what happens when you start playing mind games.. |
Man dat was sum of da best poetry Ive eva seen, Im into real deep shit got sum dumb shit like dat goin on wit me. Well done homie...Keep it up.
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yo nice homie good poetry,,,,,,,,i give u props for that homie,,,,,,,,,,nice expression
poetry is def yo thing// keep doing it |
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