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Lil-Youngstah vs Yung Soulja
Battle Rules:
6-8 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hating Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-06-04 at 12:09 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
still waitin for ya to spit yung soulja...........
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Yung Soulja has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 12:35 PM.
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Lil-Youngstah has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 02:21 PM.
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Here comes da true SoulJa with an "Ak-47"//
Makin more of a "Dramastic" scene 2 ya since 7/11... betta not fuck around or you'll "catch" a bullet on da Curve// I'm Lirically-Easily Killin you so dat's u Deserve... Now Befo I "Bust" a Cap by "Clicking-da-Trigga"// U better think it "Twice" about Yo-life-Nigga... This "G" gonna kill ya Quicka then da "Speed-of-Light"// Im "Blowing" ya off da Map so with an Explosion i'll take-ya-life ye so dat's my verse just waitin for yours now... |
Young Soulja from New Orleans, LA.
I'm a Beast from da East(New Orleans East) and I rep that 6th Ward Downtown, St. Phillip St. fa shiggaty ->Watch out Lil-Youngstah the "gaysta's" on the loose yall= ->Oh no a real thug from the "gangsta" state of Utah = ->I'm finna punish you but don't confuse me wit yo dad = ->I'm fuckin you up in rap, man he fuck you in the ass = ->You take to a dick like a dog to a bone= ->Oh you can rap? Yaah wrap yo lips around somebody dome ->You ain't no lyricist you can't spit bitch you swalla = ->Based on yo name you still a "juvenile" you get it from yo mama= |
aight coo let's start this..............uppin for votes
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This was feedback posted for Lil-Youngstah
^lil' youngstah- 7/11?
Now Befo I "Bust" a Cap by "Clicking-da-Trigga"// U better think it "Twice" about Yo-life-Nigga... ^ i don't see why you put quotations around what you wrote when there's no word-play or metaphors.. yung soulja- ->You ain't no lyricist you can't spit bitch you swalla = ->Based on yo name you still a "juvenile" you get it from yo mama= ^nice way to end the battle for ya first, good luck with this but ur opener was the best personal stay up.. get at me, ~Lady Fiya~ |
Voted For: Lil-Youngstah
Here comes da true SoulJa with an "Ak-47"// Makin more of a "Dramastic" scene 2 ya since 7/11... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ITS 9/11 ARE U FROM HERE U.S.A. W/E BUT GOOD PUNCH betta not fuck around or you'll "catch" a bullet on da Curve// I'm Lirically-Easily Killin you so dat's u Deserve... ^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT OK FLOW NICE PUNCH BUT HIT HARD NEXT TIME MAYNE OK Now Befo I "Bust" a Cap by "Clicking-da-Trigga"// U better think it "Twice" about Yo-life-Nigga... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ WEAK PUNCH GOT FLOW This "G" gonna kill ya Quicka then da "Speed-of-Light"// Im "Blowing" ya off da Map so with an Explosion i'll take-ya-life ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ OK GOOD CLOSA AIGHT U HAD GOOD PUNCHES AND FLOW NICE MAYNE USE HARDER PUNCHES NEXT TIME Watch out Lil-Youngstah the "gaysta's" on the loose yall= ->Oh no a real thug from the "gangsta" state of Utah = ->I'm finna punish you but don't confuse me wit yo dad = ->I'm fuckin you up in rap, man he fuck you in the ass = ^^^^^^^^^ GAY PUNCHES ARE SO PLAYRED BUT ANYWAY GOOD PUNCH You take to a dick like a dog to a bone= ->Oh you can rap? Yaah wrap yo lips around somebody dome ->You ain't no lyricist you can't spit bitch you swalla = ->Based on yo name you still a "juvenile" you get it from yo mama= ^^^^^^^^^^^^ ERM W/E GOOD VERSE AIGHT U HAD GOOD PUNCHES MUCH HARDER DAN YOUNG U GET MY VOTE CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES ~PEACE~ Vote has been switched |
Fuck I Was Boust To Vote For Yung Soulja
Yo Pm Strobe And Give Him Da Link To Dis Battle Tell Him To Switch Da Vote Agiht ~peace~ |
aight coo still uppin votes people damn i messed up on some of my shit....
well...............uppin votes still honest votes will be returned |
Voted For: Yung Soulja
soulja u had better punches and vocab. youngsta u need to step it up all ur verses had barely any punches is them. all in all i think soulja takes this one. check out my battle http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149010 |
Voted For: Yung Soulja
Yung Soulja 1. Nice Flow..didn't fall or nuttin 2. Pretty nice structure...didn't stretch 3. Nice punches...pretty hard & decent..and connected 4. Nice vocab. Lil-Youngstah 1. Structure didn't come complete stretched 2. Pretty decent flow 3. Punches were good..not hard enuff tho 4. Vocab was aight Overall Yung Soulja took this one... had harder punches.. a nice flow.. and a better structure here |
Voted For: Yung Soulja
Young Solja got this... he had better lfow and better atructure...... I like your punches... you last like was funny.. lol.... over all ... you idid pretty good........ Lil.... you were pretty good.. i saw some good punches..... and some nice flow i like it.... but Young got this... V. Young Solja.. Return tha fava.. in the sig.... Aginst Wicked Clown.. THANX! |
Voted For: Yung Soulja
solija took this by a far punches hit hard and metas were ight nice wordplay good structre ight rhyming best line-Watch out Lil-Youngstah the "gaysta's" on the loose yall= ->Oh no a real thug from the "gangsta" state of Utah = youngstah had not so good structre his rhymin was kinda weak but wordplay and metas were ight best line-This "G" gonna kill ya Quicka then da "Speed-of-Light"// Im "Blowing" ya off da Map so with an Explosion i'll take-ya-life vote on my battles |
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