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KingKenoDNC vs JPoll
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KingKenoDNC has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 06:04 PM.
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JPoll has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 06:07 PM.
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i ~advise~ after this battle jpoll get a ~disguise~//
start sayin ya ~goodbyes~ he'll be embarrassed after his rappin ~demise~// all eyes on jpoll when he ~raps~ cause we know he spit ~crap~// my mouths like a lyrical ~strap~ that go whipe jpoll off the RV ~map~// nobody think im ~liein~ when i say you got trashy ~lines~// everytime you spit/type a ~rhyme~ you leavin RV filled wit ~grime~// this should be a crime how my rhymes make his brain ~rattle~// next time avoid this ~battle~ cause my flows chop you up like fresh ~cattle~// |
A magnetic match, like a trailer park to a tornado
Matt Damon even knows, keno is Bourne to get the KO His wack written identity, proves JPolls supremacy We know hotness rises and shit drops ....................................thats his type of relativity A theory for the ages, dazes me of just how shitty Cause his skills are outta sight, like painted over grafiti This kids starting a crew called 'the never pro's' Cause his wack shit will be around about as long the expo's |
Voted For: JPoll
yo jpoll dogg u had some good punches and vocab. u also had flow so i have to give this one to jpoll. keno step it up a liittle. it wasnt to bad though. check out my battle http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=153747 |
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Voted For: JPoll
i ~advise~ after this battle jpoll get a ~disguise~// start sayin ya ~goodbyes~ he'll be embarrassed after his rappin ~demise~// all eyes on jpoll when he ~raps~ cause we know he spit ~crap~// my mouths like a lyrical ~strap~ that go whipe jpoll off the RV ~map~// ^^^^^^^^^^ (GASP) NICE PUNCHES AND FLOW MAYNE BIG PROPS TO YA nobody think im ~liein~ when i say you got trashy ~lines~// everytime you spit/type a ~rhyme~ you leavin RV filled wit ~grime~// this should be a crime how my rhymes make his brain ~rattle~// next time avoid this ~battle~ cause my flows chop you up like fresh ~cattle~// ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT U WENT WEAK ON DIS PART,,,,, BUT ANYWAY U HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND FLOW KEEP IT UP MAYNE A magnetic match, like a trailer park to a tornado Matt Damon even knows, keno is Bourne to get the KO His wack written identity, proves JPolls supremacy We know hotness rises and shit drops ....................................thats his type of relativity A theory for the ages, dazes me of just how shitty Cause his skills are outta sight, like painted over grafiti This kids starting a crew called 'the never pro's' Cause his wack shit will be around about as long the expo's ^^^^^^^^^^^^ JPOLL U HAD NICE PUNCHES AND FLOW U HAD WORDPLAYS DIS BATTLE GOES TO JPOLL HE HAD BETTA PUNCHES KING U HAD GOOD PUNCHES DIS AN CLOSE BATTLE MAYNE U ELEVATED SINCE TOXICVERBZ BATTLE KEEP DOING YA THANG MAYNE RETURN AN FAV (HONEST VOTE) |
Voted For: KingKenoDNC
i hate dem fuckin slashes its too newbieish(no hate). king u won dis battle cuz ur punches hit harder, however dis battle was type whack. but my vote goes to king |
Voted For: JPoll
Honestly JPoll took this one, he used good wordplay and had some nice punches. King Keno, your structure wasnt really all there and the punches weren't that great, my advice, lose the ~ and work on your structure, that will help you to elevate. JPoll You had some good punches there, nice wordplay and good personals aswell, the only part of your verse I didnt think was so hot was the closer, but that was still a pretty good punch, just maybe coulda been worder different. Overall was ok battle, Keno needs to come stronger next time, JPoll dont really need no advice from me. Blah. |
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Voted For: KingKenoDNC
vote goes to kingkenodnc, he had much better flow and i liked his punches more, in his punches he inculded wordplay and cheeky metaphores, all good man i liked it!! yo jpoll, your shit was preetty good but i think kings was better!!! well done both, please return an honestly vost to one of the battles below! |
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