J-Will vs thechosenone
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-07-04 at 08:25 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

TheChosenOne has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 08:30 PM.

lets do it
The games over i have ur moms bend over
you aint know thechosenone and T.O.T taking over

Jwill herb as nigga who wish he was as good as me
but please u aint never goin to spit like me
i'll leave u dead in the street cuz u was poppin off the mouth to much... u think ur tough but u be the one in school always geting beat up...

u call ur self the problem but sucking niggaz dick is not how ur selve them
i run through niggas like i run out of condoms
ur bars are weak like a weak as album..

im done its a wrap

J-Will has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 08:45 PM.

this is not my verse

From the start to the finish
I'ma bark on contenders
Wanna tarnish my image
I can't promise forgiveness

J-Will

This is hot as it gets, your shit's not as intense
My flow got 'em convinced, u dont know who u goin against
i'll put ur face to the fence, why u spitten out garbage u aint making no sense
Why you try'na critique this, don't take kindness for weakness
Leave you behind the speakers, body minus some pieces
Thechosenone got battles to lose , I got jaws to break
You will never excel against me... measure the rate
I got too much at stake I just follow my fate
Annihilate and dominate and I ain't even try'na wait.

u better change ur name nigga.....cuz u aint the one
and stop biting and copying niggaz make up ur own son
While you hang out, I bang out
Make moves like shots rang out
Wanna know, what my slang 'bout
like the R.Kelly i aim for ur mouth
and leave ur brains splatter on ur cough.
Your chances are slim, makin' advances on J will
While you, shootin' the breeze, I'm geting brains from girl
You already know the outcome, so how come you doubt son?
("I'm goin' out by any means necessary" – Malcolm)
This is not your, ordinary contender im numb 1 ur secodary

Won this battle and u know it......... and i dont give a fuck wat the website... say
if i ever meet u in real life i run up on u with a white sheet over my head like im the K.K.K

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Voted For: J-Will

J will had a much better verse.. way more extended, yet the quality was better too.. better punches, better flow, and structure.. it was a lot more entertaining to read. his lines were wittier.. the chosen one, you should of wrote more and tried to think of some wittier shit to say..

v/jwill

RETURN THE FAVOR with an honest vote right here cuz, wun..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153028

we need some more votes
people start voting for who u think won this battle

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Voted For: J-Will

this one dfinitely goes to J-will the lines that decided it for me were:
"Why you try'na critique this, don't take kindness for weakness
Leave you behind the speakers, body minus some pieces"
and
"u better change ur name nigga.....cuz u aint the one
and stop biting and copying niggaz make up ur own son"
thechosenone's punches were corny, bothyour line were stretched at some lines but overall the winner would have to be J-Will

good looking ...............
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i still need more votes
holla ta me

ayo we needs some votes
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thechosenone vs jwill


tc1 in this muther fucker

Voted For: J-Will

aiight...decent battle....good luck to u both.

chosen1- verse was really poor in my opinion. u need to work on structure so that most of your sentences are pretty similar in length. try to expand your vocab and use better words in battling and u should do better. everyone has potential mate but u gotta strenghten ya skills....only comes with practice. no hate this is just my honest opinion.

J-Will - this was a good drop mate i liked ya verse. no question you took it out with ease. good punnches, structure was a lil bit 'iffy' in some spots but its good enough for this battle. decent wordplay and good vocab.

Vote - JWILL

Voted For: J-Will

Jwill killed this shit easy...thechosenone came wayyy to played and simplistic I thought...nothing witty or very creative....a very bland and played out verse...like all the e-thug lines and self glorification
Jwill came much more consistent I thought...harder punches and more originality....

Vote=Jwill

both of you please peep and drop an honest vote
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=153472

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Voted For: J-Will

breakdown

j will

flow-9/10
punches-8/10
rhymes-10/10
structure-10/10
total-37/40(good shyt)

thechosenone

flow-5/10
punches-3/10
rhymes-6/10
structure-5/10
total-19/40

this was a one sided battle j will took dis battle good shyt tho to both and no hate or d/r good shyt

vote/j will