Word-Scape vs lyric
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-04-04 at 11:23 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

lyric has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 10:29 PM.

Uhh....this is confusing as fuck....checkin in...good luck

Word-Scape has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 10:38 PM.

iight, just make sure u drop ur verse in the appropriate spot and ull be OK

IJL, is now lowest of the low so man, we dont wanna hear it
Named yourself that cuz ppl for can only live through one lyric
Rb reject, nigga even ya own crew wont back you here
so imma wet this kid up like illegal drinking of belvedere
Topical heads dont shock me..................... give it a break
I'll let you bite more lyrics, just to see how much you can take
imma rip your own lyric...........and smack you with it now
cuz kid flips more lines.............than crackheaded clowns!
this is a three legged race and this bitch only has two
smack you, piss on ya grave and never regret that i passed you

No one likes your lyrics kid, jus sit back accept your fate
Cause when he writes his shit, even his Words try to EScape
This kids a fuckin biter, and after this battle I'll prove it
So sure his rhyme is played, Cause damn I already used it
Your whole life is fake, bitch ass fags and sluts for ya family
Only thing goin down quicker than you verse, is ya moms panties
And how you ever win a battle, when ya rhymes completly played
No punches connectin, but your the one who needs ta save face
You jus a worthless herb, pointless, for you losing is a trend
If this was a fight to the finish, your getting beat til the end

Voted For: Word-Scape

not bad battle.

Lyric - alright verse mate, decent structure, wordplay was average didnt rhyme on a line (line 7 and 8). there was an attempt at punches and personals so at least u tried i just didnt feel any connected well.

Word Scape - this was a pretty good verse some witty personals and punches. u got some tight lines in there. (cuz kid flips more lines.............than crackheaded clowns!)
u got some alright wordplay and structure accepted. you took this one out mate.

vote goes to Word Scape because i think his verse was tighter, had stronger punches and just generally better written then lyric.

upping for honest and fair votes

This was feedback posted for lyric
 

man just wanna see how good people over here see you, otherwise if i vote he calls it a d/r

Voted For: lyric

i have to go wit lyrics cuz this right here convice me
No one likes your lyrics kid, jus sit back accept your fate
Cause when he writes his shit, even his Words try to EScape

vote please...honestly

Voted For: lyric

aiiiight
lyric got this...
eter structured verse, some okay personals n metas too, the panty line was decent lol, made me laugh...
lyric got this.....

word, i dont know why u had them dots half way thru ya lines, but ir kinda spoiled it, messed up structure an not enuff personals in my eyes...
no hate
just tellin it how i see it

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Voted For: Word-Scape

this battle was wack lyrically but good competitively....

breakdown

word-scape

flow-5/10
rhymes-5/10
punches-4/10
structure-7/10
total-21/40

lyric

flow-5/10
rhymes-5/10
punches-6/10
structure-7/10
total-23/40

this was a great battle but i have to say lyric took dis b/c he had more personals and he actually had punches that make sense he also stayed on topic no hate no d/r

vote/lyric

Removed.. unexplained