Time flies eh(quick piece)
 

ayo time disintergrates in da smallest of time
n slowly da winter breaks due to another call of time
this a quick piece of mind wit a few rhymes
time leaves more cracks den da bullets of two nines
ya lifeless time sweepin into da clouds like condensation
all u can do is quit cheatin n make life proud wit concentration
fuk all da problems on da nation.. chill out take a vacation
THE EARTH! is our creation.. n sum dun realise untill dey a hospital patient
I make pages vacant till dey lifeless n ancient
No point puttin me on a beat coz i just break em
n take em to a higher point as i smoke a higher joint
degrees is growin so if ya wanna find me ill be where da fire points
RUNNIng rings round mcees like circus productions
Challengers..I bust em n reduce dey life-cycles like price reductions
back to da topic coz im flyin off but i aint gun try ta stop
This topic..i remain on-it as im typin bars u can read till ya eyes r soft
This time we livin in slowly evolvin as da world revolvin
Im givin da rhymes im holdin..scripts foldin while problems need solvin
my rhymes packed all sweetness like a pastal
If only we could just catch time n stick it in a capsule.........

okay
better than that other peice u posted
but sitll a lil weak......
improve ya wordplay an dont make ya rhymes so predictable an try use more creatvity