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Traped
yo i'm pissed off cause all ya mutha fuckers think im soft piss me off again i'll shoot ya ugly face off like laura croft my words are sicker but they are more fitter make ya a quitter my words flip quick just to make room for ur fat ass an spit yer I carry an attitude like eminem and wake up wid it every noon your just a spoon bitch i'll stab ya and throw sault in ya wound empire suck my dick if you don't like my shit get ya skull split dis dude got a problem wid me but also wid himself wid seisure fits I'll put ya in a cage wid a mic when ur on stage leave ya to stay and then throw you into da crowd n tell people ur contagous wid aids (ahhh) Im so angered im trapped anger me anymore n my rap Iight snap beat da living shit outta till ya crap beat u so much you'll go 4 a nap im born wid metaphores to out rap these geeky internet board and strangle you to death wid an imaginary imbilical chord constantly crazy call me shady ya fuck it everybody hate me say good night when I shoot ya mutha fuckers say ya prayers I never back down only clowns let bitches take ya down make disses back telling dem 2 go fuck dem selves now |
take out the "t" and you get "raped"!!!! :shocked:
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spul fuck u talentless fuckin bitch.
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:( you hurt my feelings. :( |
i'm just trying my best to elevate why have you gotta be constantly herassing me on threads just shut the fuck up man get a life.
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:( Stop hurtin' me emotionally man. I'll report you to Strobe. :(
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Blah. Wasnt great. Could of used some more multis. This had a little bit of emotion. I think it could of used some more. This could of been a very imagery filled piece. That is something else you need to work on. Better vocabulary could of been used also. Keep trying.
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Who was this about
hmmmm i wonder |
thanks least im doin my thing I can only get better now... my words are full of inners I don't actually know how to do multies yet are they like triple rhymes or something can you show me an example please?
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Your an idiot.
the only way your gonna ever be tken seriously is to make a new account, dont use yellow and red user name, dont have eminem anywhere, dont ride Em's dick, dont beef with anyone, And never ever ever ask for help. Not one other person asks a hundred times for help. The Fact is, you'v been told, many many times, but you refuse to accept it why? Because your a homosexual Now either take my advice, or take Explicit's and go kill yourself |
you can suck ym dick distilled you suck ur own dick and kill yourself.
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^learn grammar. :) And I love how he says stupid things like,suck ym dick? lol you jus makin' Distilled's point clearer about you bein' a homosexual. Damn, you sound like some lil 8 yr old. whahaaaaa whaaaahhhhh wahhhhaa :(
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you suck...im reporting every fragment of a sentence you bite from em until youre banned...salt in ya wound thing and umbilical cord thing were both from em...BITER...we can tell when you do it...its the only parts of your verses that dont suck...
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LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL YES, he finally will be gone from the site!!! tight find schema. :thumbup:
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"It's only fair to warn, I was born with a set of horns And metaphors attached to my dang umbilical cord"-Eminem I know what you do...you sit and listen to em's shit and try to reword it and twist it all around and make it fit what you want to say...and if you dont do that you keep his rhyme scheme and change the words...you will never elevate that way...quit biting and do you... |
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