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...Voke... 10-05-04 05:34 PM

(0-1) Stephen Elwood Vs Phantom (1-1)
 

Logic The Goonie 10-06-04 12:26 AM

checkty chckity...we goin 8 and no more cuz u aint worth it.

Stephen Elwood 10-06-04 03:53 AM

lmfao..

sure buddy.

Stephen Elwood 10-08-04 05:39 AM

Check in was whack, man you must have some big will,
Cause when he plays the loser circle.. its just piggy in the middle,
Above you dude, so i dont play with them tricks,
And saying your worth? is just for a kid with a lisp,
Not good, neevr respected, your just plain whack dude,
Your writtens get people laughing...... at you.


6.. cause i cbf whoring you anymore.

Logic The Goonie 10-08-04 02:52 PM

you have no chance son, imma destroy your senses
put a bat against your glasses, and 'contact' lenses
its not that when 'woods' dropped nobodys there...
everyone sees it but nobody really seems to care
sorry stephen its done, and no its not a lie
i just took you out in the same box you occupy

I shoulda done 8 but fuck it, lets get some votes....

40z 10-08-04 04:58 PM

Eh... close, and both came wack. Vote: Steph. Both had no good punchlines, verses too short.

Stephen Elwood 10-09-04 06:15 AM

chea.............

Logic The Goonie 10-09-04 01:47 PM

ehh i aint trippin more people better vote, good job i guess, uppin

Cocaine 10-09-04 02:07 PM

v/phantom.. it was close.. but phantom took it barely

Triple_N 10-09-04 05:39 PM

eh...not an entertaining read by either...not much to comment on in this one...I feel phantom's verse was a lil stronger..don't know what else to say.

Vote: Phantom

Efusive 10-09-04 05:55 PM

Stephen Elwood...

Check in was whack, man you must have some big will,
Cause when he plays the loser circle.. its just piggy in the middle,
ehh not hard.
Above you dude, so i dont play with them tricks,
And saying your worth? is just for a kid with a lisp,
not hard...dont like it much
Not good, neevr respected, your just plain whack dude,
Your writtens get people laughing...... at you.
played, weak

Socrates...

you have no chance son, imma destroy your senses
put a bat against your glasses, and 'contact' lenses
weak.
its not that when 'woods' dropped nobodys there...
everyone sees it but nobody really seems to care
blah...weak
sorry stephen its done, and no its not a lie
i just took you out in the same box you occupy
dont like it.

both came weak and i dis-liked about the same amount of lines
in both verses, im going to give this to Socrates for coming
a bit harder...he wins by a pinch, Stephen Elwood you came
with blah lines that i didnt feel as much, guess i likes soc's
better...harder overall verse....blah........


V/ Socrates.

schema 10-10-04 12:14 PM

Closed. Phantom wins 3-1.


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