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stop the violence
we need to come up with some sort of ceasefire.
If it was an East Coast/West Coast or not too many soljas on tha street gettin shot we need to put a stop to this before it gets out of hand stop this shit for your childrens furure try to understand put away dem gats , that shit is for dirty rats muhfuckerz from the gutter who be usin dem baseballbats dont start killin the streetz , walk straight on your feet follow the right path , give space for our children to breathe nomore violence its guidin u straight to your grave it aint bout surviving anymore , its bout being weak or be brave we keepin the youngsta's inside in times like this its just better to hide playgrounds turned into battlegrounds imagin for yaself how a gunshot sounds |
UPPING ....................
yo wake up read and drop sum feedback i'll return the fav |
wake up
still upping...... comon y'all drop sum feedback |
i wasnt feeling it, maybe cuz its too short and shit. Try to work out ur strucuture a bit better over all its aight, use some more vocab.
No hate feed on my Open Mics |
this was alrite man, but you still need to elevate quite alot but that will come wiv time n frequently droppin verses....ya flow was o.k n ya structure was gud to me but ya need to up ya vocab n try to bring abit more wordplay into ya verses, emotion was gud but cud still be upped....o.k im giv this..
6.5/10 keep elevatin n droppin...props hit this up http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153781 |
if u say ull return the fav then do
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