PostmorteM: Chalkline
 

Mad Dog™ - SinnerBitch (Seen-a-Bitch)
Lyric - Light It Up
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This is the final track from the PostmorteM "The Graveyard Shift" EP that comes out Oct. 30th...the story is the key in this...but since you listen to it once some of you might not catch it all..you can read the lyrics with it if you want....also keep in mind this hasn't been mastered...so the volumes may vary as well as a few things..but I doubt it...


PostmorteM = ~RaPiDfIrE~, Dank The Fallen, & SmokaJoka
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Verse 1 - Dank The Fallen
Pre-Chorus 1 - Dank The Fallen
Hook 1 - SmokaJoka
Verse 2 - ~RaPiDfIrE~
Pre-Chorus 2 - Dank The Fallen
Hook 2 - SmokaJoka

Here.

Hey bitches reply...FUCK

I thought this was a good track but to be honest the 1st verse at 1st i couldn't hear well but i thought yall brought good imagery and wordplay into this both cats doin their verses held it down well...coulda seen more of you though Joka...thanx for my feedback by the way im new to audio like i said

Word yo...Im on this song biatch..it should attract replies...lol

peace

this song was fuckin whack...gay ass shit..I should Smoke you Jokas jus for putting out this crap...bwaahahaha love you guys


Dank - Verse 1 I like the verse...the low sound makes it sound like your mumbling, but its jus the volume which will be fixed once you master the track....good verse..story is good..lyrics are a bit simplistic
Dank - Pre-Chorus I'm feelin it...adds to the darkness of this track
SmokaJoka - Hook Good job...flows with the track well
Rapidfire - Verse 2 decent verse...thought some of your lyrics could have been chosen better...flow is off sometimes..maybe thats jus me...lyrics are kinda simple

Overall i liked this track...it was deep..and had an eery feeling to it..

8/10

UPPIN THIS 4 SmokaJoka666

Song was dope nuff said...smoka R.I.P u had a dope hook sad to see ya go we neva met...now we never will

yo that was tight...keep it up

I wish I could e-slap the guy above me...

OMG...the spirit of SmokaJoka666 haunts the RV boards...

ROFL smoka.. u herb.. why fake a death ?

Yeah the song was dope, till you faked ya death :thumbup: .. nah just fuckin with ya..

whyd ya do it though?? was it fun??

Actually I didn't....if you kats can pay enough attention of me "faking" my death..then maybe you can find the thread where it clearly says I didnt....;)

He's Alive!!!!!