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Bank Robber (part one) revisited
Bank Robbery (part one) revisited
(me)***pulls up two blocks from tha bank in an alley*** (prolifik)***pulls up next to him*** (me)you ready to do this son? (prolifik) lets do this (both)**jumps out tha car*** (me)no turnin back from here you sure? (prolifik)lets do this (both)**walks down tha block toward tha bank*** (both)**walks into tha front door of tha bank** now me and PROLIFIK back robbin another bank but this time we got ammo that will puncture a tank a shit load of clips and we back at another city another state as we approach tha door we looked calm but we as sly as a snake with long trench coats and holsters with guns a folded up duffle bag on my side about to be filled with hundreds weighing tuns walkin in lookin suspicious and shit so we could act all rediculous and still be rich now we lookin around countin security we dont give a fuck who there cuzz to us they impurity scoped out tha cameras and now we got this bitch made out and we about to rob this bitch cops pull there weponds and they get layed out RAAAAAA get uhm PRO BlindSided The Security Then Camera InSpection.... Straight For The Safe...Then Gone In 60 Seconds... Fill The Whole Bag...Guard Dont Draw Your Pistol... Dont Draw From Right Hand Cliff...Or You Gon hear my Whistle.... Heard Siens Coming Approached Red And Blue Leaders.. Im A Set it Off Like Vivica And Queen Latiffa.... Swat Showed Up...Helicopter From The Station... We Aient Releasing No hostages...No Negoations... I See One Police Head..One Hostage Is Dead... Waiting On The Get Away Car Nuttin Else Is Said.. Fill Up Your Chest of 23 Like Lebron James.... And Diving In Slow Motion Like MaxPayne... Slipping Out The Back Without No One Knowing... Whoever Speaks Catching A bullet Like terrel Ownes.. ha ha we rich nigga we rich yea nigga aint no cops gone find us now yea lets get tha fuck outta here nigga |
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MY MISTAKE MADE SOME ERRORS THEERE |
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thought it was pretty koo,pro's verse was worded much better..
srry d some of ya lines were packed n you couldve reworded stuff ta eliminate that but overall i liked the piece n prolly say a 7.5..or a 8/10, hit my sig up please..n thanx... |
okay aiight good lookin cuzz uppin for more feedback
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i like it yall are hot
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uppin on feedback get at this piece right here cuzzo
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Nice...Upping This.....Polifick In the Building
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