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Valor 10-06-04 09:33 PM

Still-Remain vs deadly habit
 
RULES:
Check Ins Must Be In By Friday Or Your Topic Wont Be Given...
If Check Ins Are In Then You Will Be Given A topic To Write About...
Poems Then Must Be In By Sunday And Voting Will Be Over On Tuesday...
15 to 30 lines
no crew votes
no hate votes
no d/r votes
TOPIC:Feeling Empty
DUE:12:00 am western time
goodluck

Incineratedrose 10-06-04 10:53 PM

i am checking it... good luck to you.. CHECK IN!

Peter Parker 10-06-04 11:05 PM

check check good luck to you dude;)

Incineratedrose 10-07-04 06:28 PM

as to you also...

Incineratedrose 10-07-04 06:45 PM

“My heart… a tomb”
By: Still_Remain


My mind is blank, my words are empty I speak lies,
Through my eyes I cry, in time I realize,
That its you who I hate, for leaving me,
How can this be? I thought you were my honey,
We should have been together forever and more,
How my heart died that day you walked out the door,
I feel so lonely, now all I sleep with are sheets,
Without you… I miss the soft thud of your heartbeats,
I try to calm myself as I soak the pillows with tears,
What we had, its all gone, ALL 6 YEARS!!!
Can you see how you are ripping me apart?
My life is over; fuck I don’t even want a clean start,
But I’m smart you underestimated my mind,
That’s not kind, I’m crazy, how could you be so blind?
All the nights I cried for you, in the darkened black,
Only to wake up knowing you’re never coming back,
NEVER! My heart collapses and begins to wither,
I’m crushed, my heart and mind slithers,
To the deepest space, this place is called my heart,
Bleeding with a dart right into it, sanity departs,
Reality strikes me hard, off goes the alarms,
As I understand, you’ll never be held in my arms…
I’m stuck, heart empty and all alone,
Because I know, you’re never coming home…

Incineratedrose 10-08-04 11:58 PM

^can someone delete that? the other guy hasnt posted yet.

Valor 10-11-04 03:13 AM

still remain wins
due to no show


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