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Qidd MinX vs xOverdozEx
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Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-09-04 at 03:47 PM Must drop verse in 720 minutes after check in. |
xOverdozEx has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-07-04 04:08 PM.
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Qidd MinX has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-07-04 04:24 PM.
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Ayo ...
Ya Flows Useless And Meaningless Like The Bibles New Testament/ And My Rhyme Book Is Deeper Than Bible's Chapter Of Genesis/ You Should Be Greatfull, My 9 Thinks Of You With Extra-Lead/ And Your Low Skill Level Flow Reminds Me Of That Of Special-Ed./ Warming Up... You Wont Get Reconciled, You Know I Got A Better-Style And You Quick To Get Locked Upon Action Like Pedofiles I Spit Passionately, So NIgga Dont Come Snappin-At-Me Even If I'm Whack... The Fact Is You Whacker-Than-Me Ya Rappin-Is-Weak, You're Gonna Take Some Fatal-Blows And Then You Can Get Ya Ass Torn Up Like Anal-Hoes!!! When The Flamal-Throws Your Bitch Ass Is Afraid-To-Bust While Overdoze Is Here Wit A 9 Turning Ya Brains-To-Mush And Then Stain-Your-Guts.. Face It... U Aint Close-To-Me You Destinied To Lose Dawg I Got You Bagged Like Groceries So Admit It Openly.... You Suck We Got No Alliance,-Ass Basically Coz Ya Shit Puts Me To Sleep Like Science-Class Finisher This QUEER-IS-BRAINLESS Facing Me I'LL Fucking SPEER-HIS-ANUS, So CLEAR-THA-STATIONS Before I Leave You TEARING-SHAMELESS, My EARS-ARE-PATIENT You Just An IRRITATION... The Only Thing That Bothers Me More Is How WEIRD-YA-NAME-IS// done |
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rushed but i think its ok If All You Know~The~Truth Then You Realise Im Not~Gunna~Lose/ Accepted That You~Can't~Spit So You Must Have Swallowed~The~Truth/ Hold No Sorrow~For~Losers I'll Render~Ya~Frame With Dents~In~Ya~Brain/ You Weren't Just Hit With The~Ugly~Stick You Were Molested~And~Raped/ And Im Tempted~To~Say How Qidd MinX Has A Constant Negative~Way/ The Only Time You Been Positive Was When You Got Tested~For~Aids/ And Ive Yet To Mention~You're~Fake This Faggot Gets Labled~As~Whack/ These Spineless child Like~Me~Dissing~Him So He Can Be Taken~Aback/ Then You Can Savour~The~Fact My Weapon~Of~Speech Is A Lesson~For~Free/ If We Placed A Wager~On~The~Battle You Couldnt Get The Better~Of~Me/ Im Flipping~Your~Weak Script ho This Kid Im Ripping~With~Ease/ If You Excersised Your Skills You Couldn't Make A Nice~Figure~Of~Speech/ Showing Will Trigger~Defeat Parts Of Your Corpse I'll Rent~Out~To~Queers/ So When Peeps Say You~Were~Whack You'll Finally Be Lending~An~Ear/ Look Im Acsending~Your~Fear With Every Line That I Say~And~Sail/ Til I Give You Cardiac~Arrests And You're Too Poor To Make~The~Bail/ |
uppin for votes i mean cant people take a lil time
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Voted For: xOverdozEx
Overdose - good spit man, you had a good flow.. and some creative wordplay. Best Line - Ya Rappin-Is-Weak, You're Gonna Take Some Fatal-Blows And Then You Can Get Ya Ass Torn Up Like Anal-Hoes!!! So Admit It Openly.... You Suck We Got No Alliance,-Ass Basically Coz Ya Shit Puts Me To Sleep Like Science-Class Worst Line - This QUEER-IS-BRAINLESS Facing Me I'LL Fucking SPEER-HIS-ANUS .. lol, did he just say that?.. Qudd - iight spit man, your flow was off in some spot, but your lines were iight. Best Line - Showing Will Trigger~Defeat Parts Of Your Corpse I'll Rent~Out~To~Queers/ So When Peeps Say You~Were~Whack You'll Finally Be Lending~An~Ear/ Worst Line - If All You Know~The~Truth Then You Realise Im Not~Gunna~Lose/ Accepted That You~Can't~Spit So You Must Have Swallowed~The~Truth/ OVERALL - Good battle, but I gotta give this one to Over, he just came harder wit better multi's and punches. Qudd some of your shit didnt flow to well.. and some didnt rhyme work on that. VOTE - Overdose RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=153753 |
Voted For: xOverdozEx
Flow - over Punches - both Personals - over had alot more, and were alot better, Multies - Obviously over won this (he bad) Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses =over |
thanx for the votes yall
and gkillaz i wuld vote in the battle but i cant vote till i got 20 posts ill try to post some more and then start voting lets get some more votes plz... how much is a K.O. 5? |
Voted For: xOverdozEx
Ya Flows Useless And Meaningless Like The Bibles New Testament/ And My Rhyme Book Is Deeper Than Bible's Chapter Of Genesis/ You Should Be Greatfull, My 9 Thinks Of You With Extra-Lead/ And Your Low Skill Level Flow Reminds Me Of That Of Special-Ed./ ^^^^^^^^^^^^NICE OPENER MAYNE GOOD PUNCH You Wont Get Reconciled, You Know I Got A Better-Style And You Quick To Get Locked Upon Action Like Pedofiles I Spit Passionately, So NIgga Dont Come Snappin-At-Me Even If I'm Whack... The Fact Is You Whacker-Than-Me Ya Rappin-Is-Weak, You're Gonna Take Some Fatal-Blows And Then You Can Get Ya Ass Torn Up Like Anal-Hoes!!! When The Flamal-Throws Your Bitch Ass Is Afraid-To-Bust While Overdoze Is Here Wit A 9 Turning Ya Brains-To-Mush And Then Stain-Your-Guts.. Face It... U Aint Close-To-Me You Destinied To Lose Dawg I Got You Bagged Like Groceries So Admit It Openly.... You Suck We Got No Alliance,-Ass Basically Coz Ya Shit Puts Me To Sleep Like Science-Class ^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE FLOW'Z AND PUNCHES NICE MAYNE KEEP DOIN YO THANG This QUEER-IS-BRAINLESS Facing Me I'LL Fucking SPEER-HIS-ANUS, So CLEAR-THA-STATIONS Before I Leave You TEARING-SHAMELESS, My EARS-ARE-PATIENT You Just An IRRITATION... The Only Thing That Bothers Me More Is How WEIRD-YA-NAME-IS// ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ HA PERSONAL AND A PUNCH NICE CLOSA If All You Know~The~Truth Then You Realise Im Not~Gunna~Lose/ Accepted That You~Can't~Spit So You Must Have Swallowed~The~Truth/ Hold No Sorrow~For~Losers I'll Render~Ya~Frame With Dents~In~Ya~Brain/ You Weren't Just Hit With The~Ugly~Stick You Were Molested~And~Raped/ And Im Tempted~To~Say How Qidd MinX Has A Constant Negative~Way/ The Only Time You Been Positive Was When You Got Tested~For~Aids/ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ALL FLOW BUT NO PUNCHES And Ive Yet To Mention~You're~Fake This Faggot Gets Labled~As~Whack/ These Spineless child Like~Me~Dissing~Him So He Can Be Taken~Aback/ Then You Can Savour~The~Fact My Weapon~Of~Speech Is A Lesson~For~Free/ If We Placed A Wager~On~The~Battle You Couldnt Get The Better~Of~Me/ Im Flipping~Your~Weak Script ho This Kid Im Ripping~With~Ease/ If You Excersised Your Skills You Couldn't Make A Nice~Figure~Of~Speech/ Showing Will Trigger~Defeat Parts Of Your Corpse I'll Rent~Out~To~Queers/ So When Peeps Say You~Were~Whack You'll Finally Be Lending~An~Ear/ Look Im Acsending~Your~Fear With Every Line That I Say~And~Sail/ Til I Give You Cardiac~Arrests And You're Too Poor To Make~The~Bail/ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT U HAD FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT REALLY HITTIN IT,,,,,,,,,ELEVATE ON DAT MAYNE NICE FLOW'Z BUT I DIDNT SEE ANY DECENT PUNCHES DOZ-U HAD GOOD PUNCHES DECENT ONES ALSO,,,,,,,,,,AND U HAD GOOD FLOW KEEP IT UP MAYNE,,,,,,,,,,,ALSO PERSONALS DA CLOSA WAS SIK~~! QIDD-WORK ON DEM PUNCHES DIDNT SEE NO HITTIN AT YO OPPENENT TODAY U HAVE GOOD FLOW,,,,,,,BUT ATTATCH GOOD PUNCHES WITH IT OK GOOD VERSE BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT REALLY HITTIN IT ~PEACE~ |
iigh thanx vote people plz i think that i need 2 more
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This was feedback posted for xOverdozEx
are you the same over dose from rappersforrum.com?
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Voted For: xOverdozEx
Tite battle but xoverdosex wins, just a betta structure and flow. |
This was feedback posted for xOverdozEx
ok look u in my crew so it about time i look at your shit man and i got to say it ain't as bad as i thought it would be. but there still thing i didn't like: get rid of shit like Finisher or Warming Up...., i don't like how the opener and the warm up and the finisher all have different flows. alot of personnals need more punches and that about it
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Voted For: Qidd MinX
this was a tough battle to vote on. Both had some tight multies that was killin it. OVERDOZE=You Wont Get Reconciled, You Know I Got A Better-Style And You Quick To Get Locked Upon Action Like Pedofiles Qidd=Im Flipping~Your~Weak Script ho This Kid Im Ripping~With~Ease/ If You Excersised Your Skills You Couldn't Make A Nice~Figure~Of~Speech/<sickest line in the battle But ima have to give this to Qid cuz he had more multiepunches that hit harder than Overdose even tho he had some good ones too. Both had good structure but the punches at the ends of the multies decided the battle here. holla at me |
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