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50Cal. 10-08-04 01:10 AM

Empire vs infector mindz
 
Battle Rules:

6 -8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


OK ONE TIME TO NEWB BASH I BEAT HIM AS MY ALAIS HES STILL TALING SHIT TIME TO BE MERKED AGAIN DAMN WHEN WILL YOU LEARN?

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 10-11-04 at 01:10 AM

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Old battle win

System 10-08-04 01:11 AM

Infector Mindz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-08-04 01:11 AM.

System 10-08-04 01:12 AM

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-08-04 01:12 AM.

JRoy 10-08-04 01:20 AM

blast ya 'BRAIN' and make them "Spread~n~SHUFFLE"/
got it to confused and 'greasy' more than a 'BAG~0f~RUFFLES" when its like you see(n) a "JIGSAW~PuzzLe"/(confused like tryna put a jigsaw 2gether)

got you "Spirtual~with~a~SPARK" when my PUCNHES made your -
"SIGHT~DArK"/
got you bein "BURNED~in~BARK" and feelin that your are the "JOAN~of~ARC"/(she burned in bark..)/

suck your "Power~flowin~life" with just a "Coffe-Straw" and got you nervous by "Crawlin~Walls"/
when you see your "SPirt~falls" you jump of mountain and die faster then "Fast~N~Coming~calls"/(calls are fast and then when you pick it up no ones there)

get dissed you clap for me like "CLAPPNG~Walrusis"/
got you dirty like a "2min~piss" and infected with "RAPiES" more than a "Sent~viruses"/

50Cal. 10-08-04 01:46 AM

Respect mine you couldnt ''INFECT MINDZ'' if you spit aids in brain cellular tissue
Ya rhymes just bullshit played lines time to find wackness is at the core of ya issues
Ya punches something like holloween pumpkins big pieces is missing
Lost bouts running ya mouth and got crossed out like verbal CHRISTIANS
Still hating a diqualification and ya elevation aint increased a single percentage
Still looking for credit in deep debit with them voting rings you done rented(1)
Lose you will of course ya thoughts is mostly off like crooked accountents
I laugh cuz ya crew name show you can only be half of my talent(50=half his crew is 50th brigade)


explanations-
i beat him once on a dq dumbass broke the rules dropped 12 lines in a 6 line battle
1)this asshole has a newb voting ring im watching him and 4 others vote on all each others shit in like 5 minutes like 15 battles all them 4 people on each others battles

JRoy 10-08-04 01:53 AM

[QUOTE}explanations-
i beat him once on a dq dumbass broke the rules dropped 12 lines in a 6 line battle
1)this asshole has a newb voting ring im watching him and 4 others vote on all each others shit in like 5 minutes like 15 battles all them 4 people on each others battles[/COLOR][/SIZE][/QUOTE]

Ok Voting Circle?? i vote on who wins honestly......i vote on who has a better overall drop...

AND I"M UPPIN 0-0

JRoy 10-08-04 02:28 PM

ok i'm uppin again.....0-0....lets get them votes upped you know :thumbup:

JRoy 10-08-04 11:59 PM

Ok mayne we uppin up in this thread....0-0 come on lets get some votes...

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JRoy 10-09-04 03:09 PM

iight i'm uppin again....come on lets get sum votes flowing...


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Reverse 10-09-04 08:55 PM

This was feedback posted for Empire
 
chekin polls.. nice drop should b close...............

Darklsage 10-12-04 05:29 PM

i challenge u
 
lets battle whats good this is darklsage ready for anyone

JRoy 10-13-04 09:51 AM

Come on registerd Voters....lets get some coming..UPPIN 0-0

Hitchcock 10-13-04 07:57 PM

Voted For: Empire

empire put this dude's bizness oooout hahah. Good drop. The structure was good, n multies/punches were on point so the drop flowed real well.
Infector's bars were too forced n stretched, its like he's tryin too hard to rap or somethin. His bars need too much explanation Empire got this battle in the bag
holla at ya boy
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Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

D-ICED 10-16-04 11:00 PM

This was feedback posted for Empire
 
uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppppppin

HoPe 10-16-04 11:57 PM

This was feedback posted for Empire
 
lol..good battle....

empire: it seems like u keep gettin better n better man.. why is dat??? lol.. u dno't really need to improve...

score:
punch: 9/10.. pretty funny ones like infect mindz line was good
flow: 7/10 okay flow..but wasn't nyce...
structure: 7/10 alrite i guess
personals:10/10 relly good ones...

infect mindz:yea urs was good also..but just didn't have good enough punch lines!

punch: 6/10..blah..jst didn't come hard enough..
flow: 6/10 blah..come on man.dis is important too cuz it will make the person understand it more..
Structure: 6/10 blah..come on man..make it good in struc.. that also helps ppl understand the verse better..
personal: 0/10..blah!! none!!

vote: empire

damn... i need 500 posts..w/e..feed back


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