Socrates vs ~philosopher~
 

Battle Rules:

20 lines max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Good luck :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 10-08-04 at 04:59 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

Socrates has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-08-04 03:01 PM.

~philosopher~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-08-04 03:02 PM.

i beat all these peoples asses what makes you special?
you good? you got it twisted like a mutha fuckin pretzel
but lemme be real, i like you, your a good little guy
till i split you into peices and tear out your eyes
i wont even come with a punch, leave the next line blank
......................................what you thought i was fake?
man philosophers dont rap, go predict someones future
like your own, and then realize that i already beat you
i cant believe i waste time on herbs, its truly a waste
your rhymes are more shitty then adjectives describin your face
im rich beeotch! and your lines will never contain wealth
so next time in the rules just wish good luck to yourself
you aint freestylin kid! take your ugly ass home
just cuz you play games with your head....
.....dont mean you come off the top of the dome!
just keep it real withyour self, you dont have any hope
i have more people who like me than you have posts
its over, so to finish you off i guess ill only use one word
yourerhymesaremoreshittythantheotherwordforturd

ehh, vote....

You can post a hard verse, but i'll just come right back/
Like I was a boomerang you throwin at mc's that are wack/
Your rhymes look like skiers going down a steep slope/*
If you grew in villagepimp actic, you still wouldn't be 'dope'/**
My mind games keep you thoughtless, like budah in his medatation/
It's like I kicked your ass in a garden, leave your mind in 'vegetation'/***
Anyone who's heard this kid rap would say he sucked/
Claims to be a pimp, but he the one who gettin fucked/
His rhymes make as much sense as Oprah Winfrey in boody calls/
I'll 'castrate' yo ass, I know you scared cuz you 'got no balls'/**
My rhymes keep people entertained, yours keep em bored/
I must be the pimp here, cuz you the one gettin 'whored'/
I'll rip out your adams apple, so when you lose, no one can hear you scream/
Your thoughts are like 'glass' bein RV's sickest, I just 'shattered' your dream/
This guy never pimped a bitch, only will in another generation/
Last time he ever pimped a bitch, she was named "imagination"/
Your so wack people ask "Phantom, you sure your not part greek"*/
Whoa whoa, hol up, "Phantom, didnt I smoke you last week?"/
Your writtens are 'ill', cuz when I read them I hurled/
Ima beat your ass back into the supernatural world/

Explanations
* Means going down hill, think bout it
** Villagepimp, ex leader of pot (dope) smokers alliance
*** Vegetable, one who can move think talk etc.
** Castrate his balls, has no balls, no guts.... think
* Greek people are associated wit herbs, ex: Oregano

Voted For: Socrates

vote- socrates..

punches, werdplay, meta's- socrates..

philo try to put more meta's in yur verse and wittier punches to make them land and hit hard..

return favour- on the sig.. .

right......... uppity up up uppin

up up upitty up up..........uppin

uppin people, dont sleep

Uppin damn people dont sleep, post votes

Voted For: ~philosopher~

im votin against u cuz ur whacked u didnt win u had no hot flow it uz boring socrates punchlinez and disses were better i am voting for him cuz hiz rhyme wuz more enoyable den urz

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

:(....we gotta get that changed? uppin..........50

This was feedback posted for Socrates
 

da da doo.....good both....................................

Voted For: ~philosopher~

Both were good and shit nice battle both of you but there is only one personai can vote gfor

Socrates: ya shit was very good nice shit you had there nice lines... first of all you had it in structer ya strcutrewas goood... also votes goes you you in flow... it was better... punches not so good.. alot was iight but 1 one very wack...ya personals was not that good either... some ok ones...

Philosipher: your shit was good....nice lines nice verse overall... you had iight structre but you lost on that... also ya flow wasnt that good.. but you beat socrates in Punches... you definalty had better punche by a lil.. also ya pwersonalsd were good... which won you the battle

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