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Lyrical Disciple vs RED BEAM
Battle Rules:
BATTLE 15 MINUTES TO CHECK IN AND 45 MINUTES TO DROP YA VERSE 6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-09-04 at 04:22 AM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
Lyrical Disciple has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-09-04 03:54 AM.
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RED BEAM has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-09-04 03:54 AM.
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exactly nigga ill put a "RED BEAM" on ya chest
have you gaspin for ya breath you aint tha King from Sac you mean tha Queen only time you royal is in ya dreams thinkin you "got connects on RV" sorry cuzz i think you mean "burgers at arbys" ill serve you like employes servin coffe get to cocky and ill throw "punches" that will knock you out like "rocky" ill "heat" you up like a "Red Beam" and "burn" yo ass like "usher"(usha) get to close and tha Lyrics will crush ya ill have ya so called "connects" turn they back and rush ya cuzzo from Sac(sack)that why he be ridin dicks he like a lil boy make beef and call it quits ill play some"Basketball"with ya head reshape it and play "Football" SOME BODY CALL THA MED!!! ya choose "Red" you always end up bleedin chrome on tha dash will leave yo ass freezin like an ice cicyle cant you see you fuckin with tha Lyrical Disciple ya rhymes is played out you goin "around" in a "circle" im "flooding" tha "flow" but im not steeve earkle i hope this is Perspiuous cuzz i dont wanna have this conversation again Gelatnous nigga for votes he go and try to make Friends |
he wants us to compare him to washers, he says he's all around the whirl
Whenever beef crosses your path, you find a corner and curl You prolly think like a diplomat, you love rockin pink I guess i'll take out this old garbage, cause i learned you stink Lyrical Disciple, thats funny, i'll never run to you for advice Im the type to strike up fire, i'll get in yo head like lice he only wanna battle me, cause i votes against his weak rhymes Dawg, your facing one of the best, take this here as a sign when i beat you 5-0...i know you'll be loosin it but this nigga so used to failin, i think he's abusin it Red BEAM on ya dome, this niggas rhymes is real simple you got no potential to go against me, get popped like pimples -fuck it, i quit, im tired |
ahhh i think you got that one hommie lol uppin on votes
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Voted For: RED BEAM
BEAM structure is alright.. flow fell off a little bit.. no multis.. u attempted wordplay, but that didnt come out so great.. a few of ur punches connected.. no good personals.. Lyrical Disciple structure is good.. flow falls off a little.. no multis.. puting "" around ur words doesnt make wordplay.. u attempted it, but most of it came out wack.. not very many of ur punches connected.. no good personals.. Overall both had a pretty good structure.. both flows fell off a little.. both attempted wordplay, but neither of them came out to good.. neither had multis.. neither had good personals.. what it comes down to is that BEAM had more creative punches.. Disciple tried, but putting a red beam on his chest WASNT creative.. so basing off of that.. BEAM gets my vote.. VOTE - BEAM Please return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig. |
that aint my style of puttin tha "" for wordplay thats my style of connecting two thing get it right miyate i use this for wordplay < >
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Voted For: Lyrical Disciple
he wants us to compare him to washers, he says he's all around the whirl Whenever beef crosses your path, you find a corner and curl You prolly think like a diplomat, you love rockin pink I guess i'll take out this old garbage, cause i learned you stink Lyrical Disciple, thats funny, i'll never run to you for advice Im the type to strike up fire, i'll get in yo head like lice he only wanna battle me, cause i votes against his weak rhymes Dawg, your facing one of the best, take this here as a sign when i beat you 5-0...i know you'll be loosin it but this nigga so used to failin, i think he's abusin it Red BEAM on ya dome, this niggas rhymes is real simple you got no potential to go against me, get popped like pimples ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE,,,,,PUNCHES WERE "OK" AND THE FLOW WAS GOOD~! USIN AN PERSONAL AND PUNCHES THATS AN PLUS~! OVERALL GOOD VERSE KEEP DOING IT USE HARDER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS exactly nigga ill put a "RED BEAM" on ya chest have you gaspin for ya breath you aint tha King from Sac you mean tha Queen only time you royal is in ya dreams thinkin you "got connects on RV" sorry cuzz i think you mean "burgers at arbys" ill serve you like employes servin coffe get to cocky and ill throw "punches" that will knock you out like "rocky" ill "heat" you up like a "Red Beam" and "burn" yo ass like "usher"(usha) get to close and tha Lyrics will crush ya ill have ya so called "connects" turn they back and rush ya cuzzo from Sac(sack)that why he be ridin dicks he like a lil boy make beef and call it quits ill play some"Basketball"with ya head reshape it and play "Football" SOME BODY CALL THA MED!!! ya choose "Red" you always end up bleedin chrome on tha dash will leave yo ass freezin like an ice cicyle cant you see you fuckin with tha Lyrical Disciple ya rhymes is played out you goin "around" in a "circle" im "flooding" tha "flow" but im not steeve earkle i hope this is Perspiuous cuzz i dont wanna have this conversation again Gelatnous nigga for votes he go and try to make Friends ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE VERSE HERE GOOD ISH,,,,,,,HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW V-LYRICAL DISCIPLE CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCES AND FLOW YO REDBEAM I C U TRYIN TO USE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT HITTIN HARDER ELEVATE OK U'LL GET BETTA ~PEACE~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
upppppn this.....need some more votes
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Voted For: RED BEAM
i think red beam took this one.it wasnt that hard, and i really think this was a weak battle, but lyrical was at his throat with this one.lyrical had too many strectched lines in there, so i wasnt feeling the whole structure of the flow, and in beams flow, some lines needed more words added. beam had better punches, and more of em landed, so i think he took that category, and he also took it with structure lyrical had more personals, i was feeling that, but overall i think red beam took this one. -good flow yall, elevate more |
good lookn with taht vote...aiyo just uppn this to the top
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uppin on votes yall get at this thing....................
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uppn on more votes honest votes
if it aint honest or explaine dq'ed |
Voted For: RED BEAM
Orignal Battle RED BEAM- Yo punches were harder than Lyrical's & they landed.. Tha flow was pretty decent in there.. Tha structure was in place & not stretchy.. Tha vocab was aight.. Lyrical Disciple- Yo punches were hard..but not hard enuff Tha structure kinda lack'd Tha flow fell-off a little and ur vocab was aight Overall RED BEAM took this one..wit harder punches a better flow and a nice structure... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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