Spectre vs Unexpected
 

Battle Rules:
6 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/r

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-09-04 at 04:27 PM

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Spectre has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-09-04 03:58 PM.

Unexpected has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-09-04 04:03 PM.

Okay,this cats prone to get disected, infected~
Hes jus like an incompetent dude:cant get erected~

Shatter ya dome and ya spinal cord in 10 seconds flat~
This wigga lacks, while i clap his trap,this wiggas rhymes sound like a baseball-bat "Wack"~

Dislocate every bone and muscle in ya body~
Evaporating ya rhymes chemically and periodically~

hey.....i dont kno if its all gonna fit for 6 lines it is now but onli just by 1 character...so my bad if its 6 and a half lines..Pz

Im like a toolchest sittin on the workbench/
Always on top of things with my tool of choice/
Expect the unexpected and get those lenses corrected/
Your readin a masterpiece no need to sauce it up/ (Masterpiece BBQ sauce)
You can (RE)*cycle these lines all you want/
After all your just a su-*spect to me with the added R-E

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This was feedback posted for Spectre
 

Honestly, this battle is kinda bad both wayz, but Spec seems more experienced with his structure and his verse connected, Unexpected, it looks like u coulda had something going, but u lost me.
Both needs to elevate

Voted For: Spectre

Spectre - good spit man, you hard some good word play and your flow was on.

Best Line - Shatter ya dome and ya spinal cord in 10 seconds flat~
This wigga lacks, while i clap his trap,this wiggas rhymes sound like a baseball-bat "Wack"~

Worst Line - Dislocate every bone and muscle in ya body~
Evaporating ya rhymes chemically and periodically~

Un - iight spit man, your shit didnt rhyme and you didnt have many punches.

Best Line - None

Worst Line - Im like a toolchest sittin on the workbench/
Always on top of things with my tool of choice/

OVERALL - one sided battle, with the winner bein.. Spect, he came harder and threw better punches. Un you need to flow and rhyme your shit better n work on some wordplay.

Vote - Spectre

Voted For: Spectre

Okay,this cats prone to get disected, infected~
Hes jus like an incompetent dude:cant get erected~
^^^^could have been done better, but not bad 6/10
Shatter ya dome and ya spinal cord in 10 seconds flat~
This wigga lacks, while i clap his trap,this wiggas rhymes sound like a baseball-bat "Wack"~
^^^nice multis, good punch, but slightly strecthed, 7/10
Dislocate every bone and muscle in ya body~
Evaporating ya rhymes chemically and periodically~
^^^good vocab but no punch really, 4/10

not bad, i like you verse, total=17/30

Im like a toolchest sittin on the workbench/
Always on top of things with my tool of choice/
^^^na, wasnt bad 1st line, but second line just killed it, 2/10
Expect the unexpected and get those lenses corrected/
Your readin a masterpiece no need to sauce it up/
^^^not bad but it doesnt ryme!! 3/10
You can (RE)*cycle these lines all you want/
After all your just a su-*spect to me with the added R-E
^^^not bad, but they dont ryme either!! 2/10

you lost it on you last lines man, they didnt ryme!
total=7/30 spectre

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Voted For: Spectre

ya won plain n simple.

Unexpected: that was shitty, ya didnt rhyme, have any scheme, ya have no flow, lines were not undersandable, ya have no given structure, or any wordplay or even a double or multi. ya just lacked every aspect.

spectre:
you werent much better either, ya have no structure at all either, ya have some wordplay and scheme attempts but ya have no skill with punches, need to elevate much, not bad though it was a good match, ya both were about the same level, straight vote.

vote: spectre

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Voted For: Spectre

spectre wun diz battl he had bettr flow wit nice disses i liked yo verse

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Uppin for one more vote, (seems i lost this one get shit spectre) I dont really do text ,

Im like a toolchest sittin on the workbench/
Always on top of things with my tool of choice/
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"Tool chest is on top of the work bench ' hence always on top of things"
"Toochest holding many different tools ' hence tool of choice"
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Expect the unexpected and get those lenses corrected/
Your readin a masterpiece no need to sauce it up/ (Masterpiece BBQ sauce)
^^^^______________________________________________ _________^^^
"Shouldnt be that hard to understand readin a masterpiece no need to sauce it up meaning no need to make this shit any spicy(hotter) than it already is ' hence the Masterpiece ((brand)) BBQ sauce"
^^^_______________________________________________ _________^^^
You can (RE)*cycle these lines all you want/
After all your just a su-*spect to me with the added R-E/
^^^_______________________________________________ _________^^^
Not complicated to understand either su(spect)(re)cycle meaning a suspect to me of recycling his lines
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The ryhme scheme just isnt the standard ryhme scheme as usual --meaning they ryhmes end at every bar, all the underlines word ryhme i dont know figure it out, al


Also end note how the fuck you figure im white, and you even know what wigga means get a grip son

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Voted For: Spectre

K spectre got this fo sho.. its over.. better punches.. less wackness... .. overall punches win battles... spectre had em.. other guy = plain wack.. not a good punch in it..

vote spect.. PEACE

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