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Society
why does it always seem that the good die young wether by natural causes or in the hood by a gun alot of us fear things that we don't understand dealt bad cards in other words we get the under hand loved ones are here one day then vanish in an instant everyday people with goals of going to princeton or artists who plan on doing some shows in kingston untimely tragedies tend to flip the script, why? cause that blue car is the one my cousin was hit by kids on the black top balling in the afternoon seeing a death is traumatizing, end up in a padded room police lie, u think one thing but the truth comes out when death occurs we the youth are called out and blamed for today's society turning out how it is why some of us spit bars or do crossovers that wow the kids niggaz be getting cartridgies put in them like nintendo systems while the family mourns over there loss like september victims * either u a winner or a loser, a follower or a leader but on the street all that matters is avoiding the 9 millimeter some of us hide in the shadows afraid to step out, why? murderers get off the hook with a killing, listen to the public out cry i'm a survivor been through some heavy shit that u won't be in a slug in a niggaz shoulder will hurt like having clap and peeing ya now trapped and surrounded, 40 seeds with the bag and tree in rape victims will go to extreme extents such as to bag their semen u may think the world is fine because u ain't seen ya share of pain but in my city which is my mind and life that is where it rains *9/11 victims |
uppin for feedback on this
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you can't call it a song cause there no chorus. and you just saying the same ol' shit everyone else say so i got to givce it a 4/10 sorry
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when did i say it was a song, asshole, dumb fuck it's a freestyle
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who gives a freestyle a title???? and where you say it was a free style???
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where did i say it was a song? i could see if i said this was a song, lots of peeps give freestyles a song (examples: lloyd banks - Breathe Freestyle) he has no chorus to it, on his new mixtape mo money pt.3 he named the breathe freestyle Cashing In but there is no chorus to it. my point is made
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i understand your point but you didn't say it was a free either so i just guessed. and let me re sroce it since we have decided it's a free: .............. 7/10
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uppin for more honest feedback peeps
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uppin for more honest feedback
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I was feelin this drop. Had a nice flow.. content was meaningful. structure was neat.... a good drop in my opinion 8/10
one thing though, usin the 9/11 thing in raps is a no no.. It offends some people n shit. one. |
i didn't mean it in a harsh way, if u read it the meaning is that people in the hood mourn over losses like the people from 9/11 mourned over their losses
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