Dopeman vs Malefic
 

Battle Rules:

10 - 12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 125

Check in by: 10-13-04 at 12:27 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Dopeman has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 12:28 PM.

Malefic has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 12:32 PM.

dope is ''coming for ya''...
the ''deep within'' cant do nothin for ya..*1*
u can run, u can hide, or even duck, man my punches still gon fuck you up..
fat bitch you got wide load on ya huge ass like the back of a truck...*2*
u aint gotta worry bout my flow, check your heart beat...
cause off one bar i'm eatin at u like u'd eat ur lunch meat..!*3*
''no surrender an no retreat'' so my texts will 'dilute' you an ya 'peoples'..
no messin, gettin straight to the point with the disses like a churches steeple..*4*
ya out for the count an nobody can be ya hero...
so add a 1 to ya record inplace of zero..*5*
ya gettin burnt like nero an this aint even a cd...
to make it official i'ma t-bagg ya eyes so u really can never ''see-me''..! *6*

The Council?...DopeMan?...and Welcome to the south?
Whats it mean? Your O-town self is an Empire Scout!
Im like your title there son....and your KRS-ONE..
Lookin up for talent, but like your town, there is Nun(0-town)
Dope?...Nope...Kid your a highlight realm full of bloopers-
An the best one was when you actually called urself Trooper
Please, Droppin verse you, It's like a DMV with no cone's
I tear the muscle out your mouth, an spit thru ur jaw bone
End your wit's wit spit...to leave fucked like pink lips
Readin ur lyrics, so-stretched- it's like my CPU-skipped

This was feedback posted for Malefic
 

sound like you was actually talking than rapping.........

If you only knew....

LMAO.

Voted For: Malefic

I Give This To Malefic...

dopeman: Structure Was Poor. Ya Lines were stretched Like Mad. Really Messed Up Ya Flow (in my opinion). Decent punches But Wern't As Creative. Ya Had Multies But In Parts They Sounded Kinda Forced.

Malefic: Nice structure. Flow Was On Point. Had Some Multies In This. Nice Wordplay And Metas. Punches Hit Harder Than His. And Ya Had A Couple Of decent Personals. Nice Verse.

Vote: Malefic

everybody vote against dopeman cuz he iz a dikkhead

hotness stay the fuck out of grown mans business u fuckin idiot
upin this battle, pretty nice verse malefic, g'luck..

^^^
what is that suppose to mean?
o an upin

it meenz u r whakked u biatch iam going 2 make peep vote aganst u dikkheed

.........................fuck...
off...............okay?
jesus christ you hang on my cock like you wannabe my testicles, get the hell on with that...

upin yall

Voted For: Malefic

Malefic

The Council?...DopeMan?...and Welcome to the south?
Whats it mean? Your O-town self is an Empire Scout!
Nice punch there good structure and flow

Im like your title there son....and your KRS-ONE..
Lookin up for talent, but like your town, there is Nun(0-town)
Good punch again liked the way u dissed his location

Dope?...Nope...Kid your a highlight realm full of bloopers-
An the best one was when you actually called urself Trooper
A good punch but i think a link would've made this bar stronger

Please, Droppin verse you, It's like a DMV with no cone's
I tear the muscle out your mouth, an spit thru ur jaw bone
Nice wordplay here punch and flow on point

End your wit's wit spit...to leave fucked like pink lips
Readin ur lyrics, so-stretched- it's like my CPU-skipped
Nice closer and wordplay

Dopeman

dope is ''coming for ya''...
the ''deep within'' cant do nothin for ya..*1*
no punch same line rhyme...na flow good but thats it

u can run, u can hide, or even duck, man my punches still gon fuck you up..
fat bitch you got wide load on ya huge ass like the back of a truck...*2*
1st line no diss really 2nd line played punch aight at best

u aint gotta worry bout my flow, check your heart beat...
cause off one bar i'm eatin at u like u'd eat ur lunch meat..!*3*
hmm an aight punch but not amazingly strong

''no surrender an no retreat'' so my texts will 'dilute' you an ya 'peoples'..
no messin, gettin straight to the point with the disses like a churches steeple..*4*
1st line had flow kinda self glory 2nd line if ya gettin to the point then start coz there was no diss there dawg ur wastin lines

ya out for the count an nobody can be ya hero...
so add a 1 to ya record inplace of zero..*5*
Again no decent punch diss can't see flow good though

ya gettin burnt like nero an this aint even a cd...
to make it official i'ma t-bagg ya eyes so u really can never ''see-me''..! *6*
1st line aight better 2nd line was aight too but not a strong closer

V/Malefic He had the better punches and was more consistant overall. Dopeness u had hardly any punches to be honest flow was all you had and eve Malefic beat you on that because u had short lines then long lines str8 after ur punches hardly any seen and when there were punches...they lacked...u still need elevation dawg...

Malefic...nice punches and decent flow like i said u did take this relatively easily in my opinion u had him on flow structure ur punches killed this battle as did ur personals fav lines in particular were the O-Town lines good flippage on that...

Another thing Dopeness...lose the *1* thing it's very newb like the / thing :thumbup:

RTF in ma sig vs KING_LUCIF

yea yea, 2-0 him, nice one
upppin for more votes.............