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Vango 10-10-04 07:57 PM

Feeding on anothers verse your thoughts
 
Okay so I have a problem with this battle and I just want some feedback on what you guys think. In this battle with triple n I spit my verse which you can see below. in it i referenced him being gay and his cyber shit with tha q. he starts his verse out by directly saying in his rhyme how are you calling me gay when you say you own 12 guys. Feeding is when you take something out of another persons verse, flip it and use it to your advantage. This is what he did. His rebuttal to that was everyone calls him gay so thats was why he said that. Okay so what he is saying is that if I hadnt said one thing about him being gay, triple n would have said that verse about how im calling him gay. that makes no sense. give me your thoughts on this. peace. verses are below.





Vango's verse

The fact you even checked in shows that your not afraid to throw the dice
Since nobodys gonna say it "Who the fuck has cyber sex for cool edit advice"
See Kid you aint that nice, In fact your lyrics are leaking like a faucet
Believe me I speak for all of RV, when I say keep your gay ass in the closet
When it comes to salads im sure you toss it, Tha Q has got the dressing
I feel like your name must be Usher, the way Tha Q got you confessing
Your admission maybe its a blessing, I mean that fact that your exposed
Triple N claiming he's a pimp, while gay guys treat him like the HOES
I guess that just the way it BLOWS, and there aint no pun intended
As Triple N screams "man I aint really gay guys I was just pretending"
Your off the hook, your off the chain, .........Triple N is off the hanger
You get the new definition to the term "Check out my new Club Banger"
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10-08-04, 10:38 AM #6
Triple_N
Master of Punchlines



From: Queens, NY
IP: 36C3 7C54
Triple N's verse

Ya homophobic disposition brings pride to empire's eyes
How u callin' me gay?..when ya avatar says u "own 12 guys"
Your pathetic artistry will never leave the gallery
Like "Tim Floyd" its been everywhere except where talent-be
On rv ya slept on, u envoke yawns, u should jus quit
His origins is horin'-him, his whole town sleeps when he spits
Proclaimed "illest freestyler on the net" but worse on board
I spit live cyphers, what? u get on stage an pullout a keyboard?
Your bolsterin' 4 credible battles an got sonned in each
Split 2KO's, 2 5-1's, anyone wit 18 or more wins outta ya reach
Ya cancerous lyrics eat away at themselves from 1st line down
By 3rd line paralyzed, but at least u can carry them around(link below)
http://co.coconino.az.us/transit/vango/index.asp
Even wit handicapped rhymes ya still parkin' in rv's back
Cuz while healthy & ill its skill they will always lack
Come call me gay to my face, I really wish u would
Cuz how am I gay?..when your profession is "Handlin' wood"(link below)
http://www.cheaptents.com/Vango.htm

Explanations---2nd line the "own 12 guys" punch..ok a council is a board, an a board is usually made up of twelve guys.

The Tim Flloyd meta...tim floyd is the losingest "active coach" in NBA, his win to lose ratio is the worse in league currently. Y'all know how wack the bulls been past 4 years, well for 2&1/2 of those 4 yrs he coached them, jus an idea of how wack he is.

Closer...the link is of the vango company which sells tent an camp stuff, usually when u go camping, an pitch a tent u gotta fetch wood to start a fire...i.e."handlin' wood"

Vango 10-10-04 09:01 PM

yo uppin for feedback

Ice Pick 10-10-04 09:36 PM

I hate feeding


such bull shit

its very easy to see and read some bodies shit and counter act their words

but when the battle is usually face to face i guess feeding is ok

But i think its bull shit

Triple_N 10-10-04 09:43 PM

you could remove my opener an I still sonned u..line for line...each setup each punchline was better than ya whole verse...your nothing...I know u want a DQ so u can finally say u beat a somebody but u could never beat me lyrically jus shut up, right now u look stupidier than ya battles do on a daily basis

Triple_N 10-10-04 09:45 PM

Like I said in the pm if u think dat u can honestly beat me :laugh: then set up another battle an I'll son u again no prob.

Vango 10-10-04 09:52 PM

battle set up homo, if you dont believe feeding matters then maybe you should spit first and ill show you how feeding effects a battle. i wouldnt expect a homo like you to understand that. in a real battle, which im sure youve never been in feeding isnt even an issue. on the net, it makes a big difference, its just one spit.

Triple_N 10-10-04 09:58 PM

I have been in real battles dats why I spit real lyrics unlike u....only a herbish netcee would cry about feeding...a real emcee believes he will win no matter the circumstances...crying about feeding is basically saying "I know I lost" becuz your asking the judges to hand you the win...dats whats really homo an dats what your all about then u gon call me gay?....I pity u.

Archeologist 10-10-04 10:15 PM

I checked over this battle and find that there was no feeding.
Like Trip said he is dissed on being Gay in every battle and most post about him so he is just responding to post Vango made in the past.
Pz.


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Terumoto 10-11-04 05:50 AM

word... smart people can usually predict shit like that..

I personally see this "feeding" shit in a different way... I love two verse battles.. flipping punches is an art.. noobs flip like "WHAT, IM NOT WACK, YOU ARE" ... but witty flips are dope..

Ca'lam 10-11-04 07:27 AM

yea iflipped sonics "calamity drops calamitys" with out feeding.. i just knew hed use it.. and i won ;)

Terumoto 10-11-04 07:28 AM

get on aim fool


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