Vango vs Triple_N
 

Battle Rules:

12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No feeding, im sure your bitch ass will have problems with this one

Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 10-10-04 at 10:17 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

Vango has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 09:50 PM.

Triple_N has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 09:50 PM.

I'm spitting flames on dames, while your dancing with Tha Q
Funny how your claiming Terror Squad, when they aint heard of you *
You fed off my verse last battle, so here's some encouragement
I won't be feeding off yours kid, cuz it provides no nourishment
Your a sacrificial offering, see I've figured out Triple N
You got No talent, No deal, and No chance to ever win
Your in denial kid, Triple your vocals ruin perfectly good tracks
I put you in the corner at Kinkos, just so you could face the fax (facts)
You got the wrong DNA to be a rapper, its just not in your genes
You can tell alot by where people live, didn't you say you were from Queens
That terror squad shit was funny, but time to wake up and realize
Your only chance of beating me in a battle, is if you plagiarize



*had cyber sex with Tha Q and claims he's got a deal with terror squad

dont get it, dont vote, explained votes only or they will be deleted.

Ya punches could be "Alexander Graham Bell" an not fathem connection
You'd have an alergic seizure if talent was administered in injections
Ya punches complexity's like asians standin' under da bombs of hiroshima
Opposin' me wit those^^^^is dumber than registerin' a stolen beemer
Your verses A.D. concepts are so old I mistook them for hyroglyphics
Pharoah endured furious plagues...ya verses was killed by rabid crickets
He lacks crudentials but like "puerto rico" wants to be on the map
Frustrated by inabilities..like "handless giftship workers" he can't wrap(rap)
Like a "deaf computer geek's cell phone" your a waste of valuable time
Nonexistent on RV...he wouldn't "matter" if he spit atoms in his rhymes
Give him a straitness test...like a "blind man" takin' a eye exam he'd fail
He's in denial, cuz like loyal fans of Dr.seuss books..he pays for "fairy-tail"

Aye good drop vango...may the best man win...for those that don't get punches..I tried to make them as easy to understand as possible....u don't understand just pm me or something an I'll gladly explain.

Uppin.............................................

This was feedback posted for Vango
 

good battle to both of u both came hard both r good emcees

Voted For: Triple_N

vango: nice verse. ya had some pretty nice punches in there. That line with the triple Ns was a good idea... But some werent as effective.. like the one about tha q.. HELLA played..
flow was fine.. i thought triple was in trouble on this one..

triple N: you came dope... mad original lines... ill opener.. shit had me laughin.. nice punches throughout... nuthin wrong with structure.. flow was fine.. wordplay and metas were nice.

v/triple

Voted For: Triple_N

Yo this was a very good battle. Enjoyed reading

Ya punches could be "Alexander Graham Bell" an not fathem connection
You'd have an alergic seizure if talent was administered in injections
decent wordplay. And nice punch[b/]

Ya punches complexity's like asians standin' under da bombs of hiroshima
Opposin' me wit those^^^^is dumber than registerin' a stolen beemer
[b]lol @ set-up. decent punch

Your verses A.D. concepts are so old I mistook them for hyroglyphics
Pharoah endured furious plagues...ya verses was killed by rabid crickets
tight set-up. nice punch
He lacks crudentials but like "puerto rico" wants to be on the map
Frustrated by inabilities..like "handless giftship workers" he can't wrap(rap)
lol nice one set up too
Like a "deaf computer geek's cell phone" your a waste of valuable time
Nonexistent on RV...he wouldn't "matter" if he spit atoms in his rhymes
LOL nice set up. ILL Punch. best of match

Give him a straitness test...like a "blind man" takin' a eye exam he'd fail
He's in denial, cuz like loyal fans of Dr.seuss books..he pays for "fairy-tail"
Pretty good. decent wordplay

now to Vango:

I'm spitting flames on dames, while your dancing with Tha Q
Funny how your claiming Terror Squad, when they aint heard of you *
Decent, not that hard hittin'. But nice try
You fed off my verse last battle, so here's some encouragement
I won't be feeding off yours kid, cuz it provides no nourishment
personal. decnet punch

Your a sacrificial offering, see I've figured out Triple N
You got No talent, No deal, and No chance to ever win
played concpet. But it's still a nice punch

Your in denial kid, Triple your vocals ruin perfectly good tracks
I put you in the corner at Kinkos, just so you could face the fax (facts)
lol nice one. dope shit
You got the wrong DNA to be a rapper, its just not in your genes
You can tell alot by where people live, didn't you say you were from Queens
LOL nice one again.
That terror squad shit was funny, but time to wake up and realize
Your only chance of beating me in a battle, is if you plagiarize
decent

Flow wise, Vango took this shit. But other than that it was all triple. Triple had vocab and punches. plus, Triple actually had punches in his set-up. Ill battle. (might contend wit me and Socrates for battle of month :D) props to both. pc

Voted For: Triple_N

hm.. triple n came with more complexity and wordplay.. both were about even on flow and structure.. punches was prety close but i think triple edged it out... vango had some nice punches tho too... good personals from vango as well.. this was a real nice battle i enjoyed reading it... no hate to either of you.. u both came pretty hard on this.. but i think i was just feeling triples verse more.. he had more complexity and wordplay like i stated about so now hate to either.. good job by both i just gotta vote triple pz..

Uppin this>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Voted For: Vango

Vango:

I'm spitting flames on dames, while your dancing with Tha Q
Funny how your claiming Terror Squad, when they aint heard of you *
^^ ooh fire right there hott ass opener 9/10
You fed off my verse last battle, so here's some encouragement
I won't be feeding off yours kid, cuz it provides no nourishment
^^good consistency... nice punch 7/10
Your a sacrificial offering, see I've figured out Triple N
You got No talent, No deal, and No chance to ever win
^^hott name play decent punch overall 7/10
Your in denial kid, Triple your vocals ruin perfectly good tracks
I put you in the corner at Kinkos, just so you could face the fax (facts)
^^played concept 5/10
You got the wrong DNA to be a rapper, its just not in your genes
You can tell alot by where people live, didn't you say you were from Queens
^^decent punch nice meta 6/10
That terror squad shit was funny, but time to wake up and realize
Your only chance of beating me in a battle, is if you plagiarize
^^good closer nice punch 7/10

overall: 41/60

triple n:

Ya punches could be "Alexander Graham Bell" an not fathem connection
You'd have an alergic seizure if talent was administered in injections
^^ haha nice meta good punch 7/10
Ya punches complexity's like asians standin' under da bombs of hiroshima
Opposin' me wit those^^^^is dumber than registerin' a stolen beemer
^^ yea thats pretty stupid as was this bar 4/10
Your verses A.D. concepts are so old I mistook them for hyroglyphics
Pharoah endured furious plagues...ya verses was killed by rabid crickets
^^ehhh decent 5/10
He lacks crudentials but like "puerto rico" wants to be on the map
Frustrated by inabilities..like "handless giftship workers" he can't wrap(rap)
^^ dont like the set up 6/10
Like a "deaf computer geek's cell phone" your a waste of valuable time
Nonexistent on RV...he wouldn't "matter" if he spit atoms in his rhymes
^^ too many meta's doesnt help your verse wack bar 3/10
Give him a straitness test...like a "blind man" takin' a eye exam he'd fail
He's in denial, cuz like loyal fans of Dr.seuss books..he pays for "fairy-tail"
^^ i liked the fairy tail part but everything else was pretty wack 3/10

overall : 28/60

i was really surprised about how wack triple n's verse was... i expected more but u didnt come hard enough and i guess u underestimated your opponent because vango ate your verse up

Voted For: Vango

vango-nah. weak punches and that kinda triple n wordplay is sooooooooooo played. personals were iffy. wordplay was weak, and stop explaining shit for christs sake.

triple n-ehh ive seen much better. punches were ehh, personals unfortuneately were gone, wordplay iffy, stop usiong " "'s dammit!:cussing: but some lines were almost there i think trying too hard fucked you up.

V/Vango
because i felt his verse was ever so slightly better because it had personals and the fax line was almost witty.

pz.

Voted For: Vango

This Was A Pretty Crazy Battle Right Here...
Let Me Break Shit Down Alittle For You...
Overall:Vang
Flow:Vang
Creativity: Tie
Punches: Vang
Wordplay: Tripple
Personal Favorite: Vang

This Battle Was Pretty Tite...
But I Couldnt Get Over How Vangs Punches And Shit Just Flowed Almost Perfectyl One Into Another...
Tripples Were Good But Were Just Alittle More Akward At Times...
Nice Battle Though...
.One.