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Sdizzle .vs. Succ Maccokk
Rules G'luck To Both |
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w/e i dont really care for this battle..
quick drop... I'll "cruise by you as if I had a turbo jet cart"... You "gassed yourself up and you still can't get past the start"!!... Even if you waxed the clean, you're rhymes wouldn't shine worth shit... And hanging out in "Dirty Beans" won't help you have "ill spits"!... Reading your verses is as fun as watching overwatered watching plants grow... Don't be hyped up for this battle you couldn't even "flow in slow-mo"!!... I'll "toss and turn" you, like my garden ceaser salad... You don't stand a chance vs. me,like challenging a bard to sing out "balads"! Every line is self explanatory. g'luck. |
im schooling this kid and there arent any classes
hes the number one goal.... for rv target practice hes the type of kid that moms really want to go play in traffic shit.. his crew is very definition of wackness this fags a little kid, and he still packs lunches only quotes he knows goes around his wack punches well u can suck my cock, atleast that way u'd gain fame hypocrit... silly bitch sporting a sig confronting bad names blah |
Raphael...
I'll "cruise by you as if I had a turbo jet cart"... You "gassed yourself up and you still can't get past the start"!!... played. Even if you waxed the clean, you're rhymes wouldn't shine worth shit... And hanging out in "Dirty Beans" won't help you have "ill spits"!... could of been good...horrible wording bad setup. Reading your verses is as fun as watching overwatered watching plants grow... Don't be hyped up for this battle you couldn't even "flow in slow-mo"!!... punch worded bad setup was bad as well...could of been better. I'll "toss and turn" you, like my garden ceaser salad... You don't stand a chance vs. me,like challenging a bard to sing out "balads"! No. sdizzle... im schooling this kid and there arent any classes hes the number one goal.... for rv target practice weak hes the type of kid that moms really want to go play in traffic shit.. his crew is very definition of wackness old. this fags a little kid, and he still packs lunches only quotes he knows goes around his wack punches ok well u can suck my cock, atleast that way u'd gain fame hypocrit... silly bitch sporting a sig confronting bad names ehh. sdizzle wins for a better overall verse and harder personals/punches. raphael came strectched and played as well and used to many of these, "*''", dizzle came played to but less then raphael. overall this was a weak battle...dizzle wins with a better verse. V/ sdizzle Returnt the favor and vote on my battle...or i will be forced to edit.:) |
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Raphael's Verse: 7/40 Comments: Your opener was the only valid punch in your verse...PUNCHES WIN BATTLES....take out the quotes even your structure and think of witty new concepts.... Quote:
sdizzle's Verse: 12/40 Comments: Your first two lines were decent...the last two were anus....you know how to battle...Im not even going to suggest shit.... Vote - sdizzle |
vote=raphael
raphaels punches were harder hitting here, and only punches i liked in sdizzles was the quotes around the punches wack line and the definition for his crew but raphaels felt more enjoyable to read and harder hitting good luck to both no hate peace |
im schooling this kid and there arent any classes
hes the number one goal.... for rv target practice Only bar of the match that was even Eh... & it was Sdizzle's.. So inturn he wins the match. Up your game..both of you. V/Sdizzle -1 |
sdizzle - 3
Rick McSlick - 1 Up & Over Closed Battles |
sdizzle
u had played punches but acouple were decent,ur structure and flow was way better then rapheals was....you also tryed creativity in ur verse so decent shit rapheal u also had a played punches,basically your whole verse was played,u had okay flow,and a ugly ass structure....and the wack quotes in your verse dont help either dawg....lol overall...for better punches and structure this goes to sdizzle....... but weak battle v/sdizzle |
uhh..Succ Maccock came whack and newbish as hill...weak concepts and a lot of that shit was played and filler
SDizzle came played as well, but his punches were harder because he tried more witty concepts Vote-SDizzle |
sdizzle wins 1-0 without links, closed.
sdizzle +3 pts. Rick McSlick -3 pts. |
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