Final .vs. Stephen Elwood
Rules G'luck To Both |
checkin in......10 lines or less?
final...you do however many lines you want...he'll do as many lines as you do...thats what "ill match you" means -Schema votes go in the check-in...youre not supposed to edit your verse... -Schema votes: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1659431 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1659454 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1661767 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...605#post1669605 Wrong Schema. You agree on a line limit in your check ins. Also yopu do editt your verse to put links in. Pz. :-Archeologist Rule No.2
-SchemaYou Must Edit Your Check In With 4 Battle You've Voted On Or I Will Take Away 1 Vote For Each Missing If You Get Votes Taken Away It's Your Fault So Dont Bitch, Also No Upping Your Battle 5 Times By Both Battlers Combined, Or Freeposting Or Swaying, If I see This I Will Delete The Posts |
ill match you........
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aight thanks schema
stephens rhymes are non-significant, im gonna show him his fate congradulations, your rank is at a steady rate of zero...minus 8* this kids gangsta persona is fake and played.......it isnt honored hes gonna need armor, cuz im punishing him like havin bad karma** try to battle and beat me and see it will exceed your mental capacity u dont make sense, u drill senseless shit in peoples heads like cavities your wack raps are more annoyin then white tees with stains dont you know your gonna lose.......since loss is in your name*** u lack the brain magnitude to make a real verse u should learn some new words... what i infer,your incapable of writing a real song or poem,u learn from reading my excerpts *=his rank is -08 **=karma is watever actions u did in life, so if u did bad shit and have bad karma u get punished by somethin divine(god)(and no im not hindu i think karma goes with that religion lol) ***=his name is Elwood, El=L, L is for loss aight drop your verse honest votes good luck |
oh dear lord,
Sorry i dont try too much, no wonder why nobody loves you, So ill come half assed... basically 6 levels above you, Coming like heavy smokers, ill help you hit the tar bitch, And yeah im -8........... Yet your trying your hardest, You'll never be good, And i learned something, so listen, Ill leave you with holes... Like the Bronx education system, Got a good mind, has SOME talent, lets see, He usually comes whack........ .....cept he saved his dope concepts for me.. blah.. thats all u deserve. |
Awful battle..
best bar of the battle was Elwood's Bronx line, & even that was pretty crappy. Anyways.. V/Elwood For more consistency & dropping a punch. Final..stick to NOT battling kid. -1 |
v/ elwood..
not very impressive tho.. punches.. ell werdplay- ell personals- ell.. btw, is feeding allowed?..like the "yeah i'm -8" part.. its not allowed on most sites.? |
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final's Verse: 12/50 Comments: STOP WITH THE EXPLANATIONS...that makes your punches suck....close all your lines together instead of seperating them...and come up with punches with good concepts... Quote:
Stephen Elwood's Verse: 12/40 Comments: You dropped less than your opponent and still tied with him...if you would've matched him you could'a took it easily....but I've seen you do much better....you win for having less lines and still doing as good... Vote - Stephen Elwood |
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best lines in the battle^... everything else was aight, so Elwood did his thing on this one.. v/elwood |
elwood
him you had better wordplay,and structure in this was good,u had acouple basic lines in there but some were good,you flow was excellent i felt....my favorite line in ur verse.... You'll never be good, And i learned something, so listen, Ill leave you with holes... Like the Bronx education system, final you need to elevate man,u had okay disses but they were really simplistic man,ur flow was okay i guess,but thats it,u had really no decent lines in ur verse except for this one that is probably the best shit in your verse... stephens rhymes are non-significant, im gonna show him his fate congradulations, your rank is at a steady rate of zero...minus 8* overall this goes to elwood for an allaround better verse v/Stephen Elwood |
elwood... took it.. better overall
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v/ elwood
better verse and less played the final...final needs to elevate a bit more and try not to stretch his lines...makes his verse less interesting to read...overall elwood wins with a harder verse. |
Elwood took it for 2 ok punches which beat out Final's whack attemts and overall newbish verse...
explanations = gay Stretched lines = gay |
elwood definately took this one... final your lines was stretched punches were pretty basic.. your first bar was decent though... good personal... but the rest of your verse fell off track.. elwood had some hott punches and good wordplay. basicallly a weak battle could have been a lot better
v/ elwood |
Stephen Elwood wins by TKO (3-0) even without links, closed.
Stephen Elwood +5 pts. final -5 pts. |
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