punchline king vs ImWhiteUrDead
 

Battle Rules:

6-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No DR

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-14-04 at 11:22 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

ImWhiteUrDead has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-11-04 11:24 AM.

I can't believe this faggot tryin to use wack rappin tactics to defeat me
Ya rhymes are tragic, i look at the win then grab it so let me explain this briefly
Ya rhymes too short to reach me and you call yourself a punchline king
Those thoughts are all in ya dreams and it's plain to see ya rhymes lunchtime G
This aint fun time so take ya wack rhymes and just take um' to Mother Goose
You think there aint no way your nursery rhymes can lose but yet all i hear are boos
Ya rhymes elu-sive but obviously you want me to be contributive and give you an L
L you know as in loss not the 2nd letter in floss but it'll stick to ya record like gel
And if you can't tell i aint sayin good morning i'm giving you a warning
People will tell ya to back up before he makes ya glor-i-ous rhymes gory

punchline king has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-11-04 02:33 PM.

[b]ur ryhmes r shiter than a guy with direar
kill ur twats 1 by 1 ill do u last n push of of da pier

ur a wack as herb here to dickrideur worse than the hotnesdefined im gonna push u both aside

i said make it 6-unlimted lines fo show but u scared
but u pussyed out now get prepared

u cant ryhmes or rap ur to crap ur thick as shit cant read a map
ur just a dumb as who just like anooyin ppl n u cudnt ur hurt urself if u landed on bubble rap
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Voted For: ImWhiteUrDead

weak battle

both gotta elevate but this was a one sided battle
punches/personals-imwhite,lot harder hitting punches and much more punches then punchline king, king u gotta elevate all around no hate

vocaband creativity-im white, got both of these more vocab words in his verse, they made sense and a lot more creative

both elevate but imwhite took this one easily

good luck to both peace

Voted For: ImWhiteUrDead

shit I'mWhiteUrDead wins this just for an all around better verse.....he flowed good.....punches hit.....they weren't ill or anything but decent....structure got messed up i can see...it had ok wordplay and all of that good shit.....keep elevating tho

punchline king you were horrible......that verse was hard to understand.....it ws basic.....structure was bad.....it was all basic.....shit that was a wack ass verse

v/ ImWhiteUrDead

lol imwhiteurdead....why u gotta cheat for, didnt have faith you would get votes?, dont cheat it, doesnt help u in the long run

lol i was bored.....disqualify that one.....lol.....i was waitin for someone to notice....i was just abou to finally say wtf are you dumb RuffRidah is me lol....but disqualify that.....i was really bored and decided one day to make a user name and make everyone think i was wack andthen merk most the people who thought i was with me fuckin around sa y shit like
I'm white andthen i'm black too so i'm a niglett
I have a way smaller dick than Piglett

lol.....just fuckin.....i'm have this disqualified.....no......i got an idea.....i'll give him 2 votes off of past user names and it will be tie lol.....fair enough right?lol....i'll get at it tomorrow....this is fun fuckin with people tho

Voted For: ImWhiteUrDead

im white got this

much more complex rhyming, da better puns, da better dises, da better everythin
punchline didnt match up to im white on anything
elevate punch
good job white

Voted For: ImWhiteUrDead

you won.. no explniaitons.....
punchline jkings was wack and had me laughing... you has better verse

Voted For: ImWhiteUrDead

ImWhiteUrDead wins this due to better flow, you had nice flow mate plus some good strucutre, punches were average from both sides but i really think that ImWhiteUrDead wins this because of good flow

good battle, please return the favour and drop a vote on one of the battles below