Original
 

What is original
Is it my rhythum or blues?
Is it my courage or truth?
Is it my acsent that you
use to define my originality
or is it my personality
It could be my personality
but in life originality is
what u want it 2 be!
So what is it?

this could have been a lot better if it was longer and you added more vocabulary, it was short and to the point but you added personality twice, which kinda messed up the message, but i know you have it in you, so just dont be afraid to let lose....1,,just some friendly feedback...keep writing, and droppin gurl...1

dis wos ight i felt da vibe
keep dem comin
hey drop a comment at my poems 2
: )