drive by
 

what happend that night? u really wan kno?
aight dog sit a minute peep the flow

it was 2am and cold as fuck
me and my boys decided he was outta luck

so we got ready and puffed a blunt
poured up some hen n planned the stunt

we decided we do it nice n fast
the drive by would happen now at last

2 cars deep, windows down guns cocked
now we ready to shoot down yo block

i toldem wait till u see my ak start to sting
then get ready to let yo toastas sing

i can say now that boy finally learned his lession
that night he wouldent of lived even wit gods blessin

...haha jus a lil verse i did in like 5 min, leave some shit on what u think peace

hey make ur shit longer fuck... makin shit longer can help in some battlez...

I agree, for what it was it was ok

But make ya bars longer and more in depth, with a name like drive by you could have made this into a dfope story track .... If ya gets what im saying....

ALso you should use a wider vocab and use of wordplay and you will be straight....

Not bad
Go peep some of my shit

word to dat aand wus up ice yo man i voted on a battle of urz and i asked you to retrun the fave so could you find it in urself to do that...lol pz...

This is allright. But you need to drop longer more in depth peice's. For what this is it isnt too bad. But you could do much better.
Try a more original topic.Instead of doing a drive by.
If you do these sort's of topic's try using more emotion and imagry.
For 5 minute drop this is good. But try dropping peice's that you took more time to work on.That way your full talent will start to shine.
overall 6/10......
keep dropping....
pz

aye mayn i did something like this already why you put drive by that bittin hommie me and Scenario made tha original

no beef tho its koo no doubt its all good hommie

i aint bittin shit, yea yo and project pat made a drive by song to....so i guess every one is bittin everyone? lol but yee whateva, uppin

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yup again......tooo basic but ur getin there.....try using better and more detail words....and get some metaz and multies in there.........keep elevatin!

i dint lyke it it wuz boring