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Golden shellz 10-11-04 07:10 PM

Unwritten
 
This track is called Craze joint i had dissed my other friend






I spit life changing lyrics, that break bones and leave ya back bent
excuse for a rapper, even ya best lyrics are an accident
i could get on u personally homey, but never mind
ill get u shook so hard it will break ya glasses leaving u blind
battling me? homey its easy for me, really no job
u couldnt get hard bodied, if i said pam Anderson would give u a blow job
Fly past, ya wack ass on a track, dissin u
put DEXTERS lab in da hood, and they come up wit u!!!
u crossed the path of hell when u chose to battle me
id bury ya 6 feet under like S_H_Y_N_E

The R>I>P punch

2 tec-9's , held up by a 9 x clip
lets think, even if u had DIAREHEA u couldnt still spit hot shit

G_$peed 10-11-04 07:13 PM

yeah it was aight but nned some more wordplay... uhm flow was off too... man this wasnt hate... check my shit... its in the sig... its called True Love...

Golden shellz 10-11-04 07:13 PM

i didnt wanna do nuttin special cuz i did this during a lunch period

G_$peed 10-11-04 07:16 PM

lol aight... well check minez any way plz...

Ysdat 10-11-04 07:51 PM

this isnt to bad. wordplay need's to be edited. Flow wasnt to bad a little off on spot's. Disses were all good..
nice drop .keep them coming...pz


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