bigpappa76 vs D-ICED
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 10-12-04 at 12:50 AM

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BIGPAPPA76 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-12-04 12:23 AM.

D-ICED has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-12-04 12:24 AM.

Battle a rap legend in heaven......no this dude is a fraudaulent clone
And his raps spits aint shit almost as wack as his poems
Cross him outta quicker then Mase really a waste his brigade in 50th place
An example crews get manhandled and trampled stompped into bannaa paste
Crazy playing my record in ya avy is the closest youll come to touching my verse
Cuz in rhyming you like glass shining no matter what youll still always be dirt







Explanations-
his crew is 50th brigade hence 50 th place bar. cross and mase is a metaphore and the closer =glass is made outta sand which is dirt sometimes even dirt shines hahaha lol

wigga step back while i slice and "D-ICE" ya lyricaly, i cut to tha chase
this bitch got so many aliases hes a lost identity case

faggot wouldnt battle me under his real name cuz hes wack newbish
bitch no one likes you, all you spit is rhymes reekin of herbish

your a fuckin joke... nigga get tha fuck outta RV, ill show u tha door matt
oh yeah, before you go... I DO WANT FRIES WIT THAT!!!

BIGPAPPA76


the last line refers to the fact he works at wendys just so ya know....

This was feedback posted for BIGPAPPA76
 

D-Iced: good structure, nice flow, good punches, good meta's, good personals, nice opener, nice closer, could have been better. 6/10


BigPappa76: Nasty opener, ok punches, nasty personals, good structure, good flow, nice meta's, nasty closer (lmao),
punches could have been better. 6.5/20


vote - BigPappa76

that's how i saw it

shit... not enough posts aparantly... oh well... uppin this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: BIGPAPPA76

wigga step back while i slice and "D-ICE" ya lyricaly, i cut to tha chase
this bitch got so many aliases hes a lost identity case
^^^^^bad flow, but punch hit.. 6/10
faggot wouldnt battle me under his real name cuz hes wack newbish
bitch no one likes you, all you spit is rhymes reekin of herbish
^^^na, again bad flow, this punch didnt hit, 4/10
your a fuckin joke... nigga get tha fuck outta RV, ill show u tha door matt
oh yeah, before you go... I DO WANT FRIES WIT THAT!!!
^^^^^^HAHAHAHA thats good, 9/10

total= 19/30, good job, you saved yourself with that last line, but you need to work on your flow, try to get your lines equal, k

Battle a rap legend in heaven......no this dude is a fraudaulent clone
And his raps spits aint shit almost as wack as his poems
^^^^nice vocab, but punch didnt hit, 4/10
Cross him outta quicker then Mase really a waste his brigade in 50th place
An example crews get manhandled and trampled stompped into bannaa paste
^^^naa, bad flow, and punch didnt arrive, 4/10
Crazy playing my record in ya avy is the closest youll come to touching my verse
Cuz in rhyming you like glass shining no matter what youll still always be dirt
^^^better, 7/10

total, 15.30, notbad man.

vote goes to bigpappa, i liked your verse man, you just nned to work on your flow a little bit then you'll be great.well done

please returna nd honest vote on of the battles below thx

Voted For: D-ICED

BIGPAPPA76

wigga step back while i slice and "D-ICE" ya lyricaly, i cut to tha chase
this bitch got so many aliases hes a lost identity case
Nice punch there feelin that

faggot wouldnt battle me under his real name cuz hes wack newbish
bitch no one likes you, all you spit is rhymes reekin of herbish
newbish/herbish weak rhyme but none the less still worked an aight punch

your a fuckin joke... nigga get tha fuck outta RV, ill show u tha door matt
oh yeah, before you go... I DO WANT FRIES WIT THAT!!!
LMAO @ I DO WANT FRIES WIT THAT an aight closer that made me laugh

D-ICED

Battle a rap legend in heaven......no this dude is a fraudaulent clone
And his raps spits aint shit almost as wack as his poems
nice lookout on that link worked well there but no rhyme ya gonna lose points there

Cross him outta quicker then Mase really a waste his brigade in 50th place
An example crews get manhandled and trampled stompped into bannaa paste
nice diss on him/crew sum wordplay there too was a good diss

Crazy playing my record in ya avy is the closest youll come to touching my verse
Cuz in rhyming you like glass shining no matter what youll still always be dirt
Ouch a good closer no doubt the 2nd line hit hard there

Damn an aight verse D-ICED ya opener didn't rhyme well but you picked up which helped ya the link too was a strong help for ya as well flowed well and structure a lil stretched but if it flows well...it's good

BP76 Opener yep was good structure and flow also good no links a shame so personals good but if ya exposed his alias ya prolly woulda got more points...closer made no sense but funny lol...u white or black coz 1st word was wigga then ya called him n***a? found a bit confusing...but i felt D-ICED took this jus on consistancy BP76 we cool but it's honest votes @ end of day...

RTF on ma sig vs KING_LUCIF

imma up this shit... and mad dogg we are tight but what do u mean if i exposed his alias i would have gotten more points? everyone knows he is empire... its a well known fact

oh i didn't shows how much i know lol...exactly why i said u shoulda linked it or at least have exposed him ya know but good luck in the voting BP76 remember \/ my sig :thumbup:

uppin this shit.......................dont sleep on this

Voted For: BIGPAPPA76

ok ok. nice battle from both of you.

d-iced-not really any hard hitting punches. but u did try to get some personals in there so that was good. definitely thought u coulda came harder than that. flow was good though...overall 7/10

bigpappa76-nice opener. really nice opener. good personal. the closer was alright. the 2nd bar was kinda wack though. punches were good and so were the personals. the only thing wrong with it was the first line was kinda crowded but thats ok....overall 8.5/10


good verses from both of you but bigpappa jus had harder hittin punches and that opener was sick. nice personal man. good battle.....vote-bigpappa76

This was feedback posted for D-ICED
 

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Voted For: D-ICED

Battle a rap legend in heaven......no this dude is a fraudaulent clone
And his raps spits aint shit almost as wack as his poems
nice personal good bar
Cross him outta quicker then Mase really a waste his brigade in 50th place
An example crews get manhandled and trampled stompped into bannaa paste
good meta in first line nice bar
Crazy playing my record in ya avy is the closest youll come to touching my verse
Cuz in rhyming you like glass shining no matter what youll still always be dirt
good meta and nice punch i liked this bar

flow: 9/10
structure: 8/10
punches: 8/10
metas: 8/10
overall: 33/40


wigga step back while i slice and "D-ICE" ya lyricaly, i cut to tha chase
this bitch got so many aliases hes a lost identity case
good bar nice personal
faggot wouldnt battle me under his real name cuz hes wack newbish
bitch no one likes you, all you spit is rhymes reekin of herbish
didnt like this bar that much kinda weak
your a fuckin joke... nigga get tha fuck outta RV, ill show u tha door matt
oh yeah, before you go... I DO WANT FRIES WIT THAT!!!
nice personal at the end but i think u could have made it betta

flow: 7/10
structure: 8/10
punches: 8/10
metas: 7/10
overall: 30/40

nice drop by both but i think D-ICED took this with betta flow and punches please return the favor wit an honost vote

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