*KiRô-æ-PhY§iX* vs shake-spear
 

Battle Rules:

6 to 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-12-04 at 02:23 AM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

*KiRô-æ-PhY§iX* has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-12-04 01:54 AM.

writers block.....

yo
this kids whole career is just a ''boy-whoring-new b's''
my bars will leave this *woody more buzzed* than ''toy-story-movies''...1
your a herb, this kid is whack so ill ''SPEAR-n-smear-ya''
my bars leave him hung like handicapped signs on ''rear-view-mirrors''....2
like hes scared of bombs he's wishin he aint ''c-4'' [see four]
but check under his avy hes wishin he can ''b-more''...3
shake-spears lines are stretched and his ''bars-poor''
it obvious the *force is with u* like ''star-wars''....4[ya shits forced]......

shake-spear has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-12-04 02:00 AM.

iight here go nothin

dont take it personal but personally dis persons personals be gar-bage/
ya arms to short to hit me wit punches cause compared to u ima God-Bitch/(ya arms to short to box wit God)
stand back while i kill dis dude dont worry RV wont miss-u/
when i squezz da snub "nose" "sneeze" and "blow" right through ya "tissue"/
so all u gotta do is post ya wack verse sit back and rest-dude/
cause i dont even have to "sneeze" for u to say a "God blessed u"/
post a verse y bother? kiro im ya father i made u like MTV/
u a waiste of my sperm i wish i could go back and wipe u in the sheets/
i peeped ya last battle verse i knew from that i was battlin a herb all ya "lines" are "played" dont u think "shake" could tell/
fuck KiRô's lil hatin ass, and fuck PhY§iX i always came late to class so ill do u like the teacher and make u take da L/(teachers write L in they book when u late)

this has to be my shittiest verse ever lol i know its wack

nice last bar shits hott.................uppin no beef..........

This was feedback posted for *KiRô-æ-PhY§iX*
 

checkin the polls n stuff...
decent drop yall an upppin for both of ya

uppin 0-0..........................................

tryin to get some votes hurr/..........honest....0-0 still uppin....

up up and away....

Voted For: *KiRô-æ-PhY§iX*

DAmn Son Kiro Got This
GooD Ass Wordplay

Opener-Kiro (Shit Made Me Laugh-Toy Story Movies Aha)
Closer-Shake-Spear
Wordplay-Kiro (NO Doubt)
Punches-Kiro(Hit Harder)
Flow-Kiro (Shake Sometimes You Got Me Lost)
Multis-Tie
Metas-Tie
Vocab-Kiro
Structure-Kiro

Overall-Kiro

1-0 uppin............................................. .............

Voted For: shake-spear

I Realli Dun Wanna Say Shake Won But It Was Better Than Kiros

Let Me Try To Break It Down...

Opener: ShakeSpear
Shakespear: It Wasnt Good... Definately A LiL Forced But It Was O.K.

Kiro: That Shit Was An O.K. Punch But Was Definately Forced Like WHOA

Closer: ShakeSpear
Shakespear: I Liked It The Whole Concept And The Multie But The Lines Were Way Too Long.. Never Do Something Like That Again.

Kiro: Definately Forced Multie Again "And His Bars-Poor"... Definately Could Have Been Worded Better But Good Punch

Personals: None
Shakespear: You Really Only Used His Name Twice And They Were Not Personals

Kiro: I Dont Think You Said His Name But You Kinda Attack Him With That Forced Bars Thing.... Its Just Ignorant And Ironic That Your Shits More Forced Than Him

Multies: ShakeSpear
Shakerspear: Your Multies Were O.K. Could Have Been Better Used Tho

Kiro: Your Multies Were Better But Way Too Forced

Punches: Shakespear
Shakespear: You Had A Lot Of Good Punches Just Try To Re Word Them A Lil Better To Flow Better You Kno?? Just Read Your Flow Before You Post It Next Time And See How It Sounds

Kiro: You Had Punches But Just Reword Them If You Want Your Punches So Bad Just Focus ON Them And Not ON The Multies As Well Comes Out Too Forced

Winner: ShakeSpear

thnx for the vote son uppin more some more..........

my bars forced hahaha..............
uppin.............1-1 shake got a vote whoo hoo lol nice drop fam