Earth: The UnEdited Version
 

so many words cut out from history of the nations
information we readin' is like "truth's abbreviations"
even the Bible bas changed from hands to hands
God's PLANS for men looks like an AGENDA of men's demand
human's legs been "enhance" to "stand" the test-of-lifetime
with doctor degrees, the balance of Earth has-to-decline
life is light, evading death reflects-your-fright's-signs
but breath of the mirrors distinglish less-of-the-shine
as we explore rest-of-the-mind, grows abuse of-our-wisdom
if you inspect-on-the-crimes, they throw you off-the-system
bottom of the food chain, marked by racial classes
some store clerk mother with her husband blasted
by some racist bastards wearin' "protector of the city" badges
and passed-his 4 kids to a single mother living hazards
and this case is simlars by the masses, we grieving
like Pi, its "a problem in a circle", we know the reason
exploits, bribary and prejudice all covered in
and the blanket is the corrupted government

so now i ask you to take off your colored sunglasses
and buy the ones with prescription to see the hazards

slavery, racism and selfishness got us torn
we can fix it, without U N I we can't spell UNIFORM
all wars are civil, coz we murderin' our own-kind
i'm the right leg you the left, we be "trippin" till we combined
erase all the last names, coz we ONE family
i want to see brothers and sisters holding hands in harmony
focus on God instead of money men-worshipped
build the next version of Earth that doesn't require censorship


There will ber a part 2 to this

Earth 2 a new Version

"like Pi, its a problem in a circle", so true."now i ask you to take off your colored glasses and buy the prescription ones to see the hazards"..one of the best lines in this piece.....and the ending was great.....i was feelin this piece, foreal, all the deeply rooted issues now, damn, we need more drops like this, especially now, excellent content and some dope metaphors and multies too, very well written, i got the shivers from this.....thank you

Thanks Girl,

I just love writing, dont care what about,

If i feel like writing in the point of view of a dog, im sure i could make a dope poem and call it a dogs day ,,,,,

But yeah thanks their FLuid, and nice job on that collabo in open mics

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