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Soul Sickness vs Myth
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10-15 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate No D/R *Explained votes only* Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-14-04 at 01:14 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Soul Sickness has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 12:28 PM.
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Myth has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 12:31 PM.
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this kid claims after we battle he's done, he don't want no more beef *
he's already lost, his flows rough like tides washing through sea reefs souls choked up, here's a tissue, he seems to be copping feelings fag? this kid lets men spread his legs apart like bananna peelings now that's sickness, ain't no defending that, eww..that's some nasty shit featured with prince in the background dancing, purple rain was his last hit i could take this boy to a hardwood court and he still wouldn't be classic punches have u bleeding from the nose, dumb? u ain't on the rag dick u probably use to winning by no show's, proof is in the stats man * but u ain't gotta be a cherry for my bars to consume u like pac-man faggot all ya useless bickering and nagging is getting to me, i'm annoyed why u claiming ya hard but ya rhymes come plastic like mcdonald's toys how u gonna talk shit, 2 wins away from matching ya wins and losses, damn son * homosexual tendencies? u a fag go dye ya hair blonde like sisqo and then join hanson welfare or poor? kidnap ya, but ya ain't shit, ya family sends coins as ransom * *http://community.rapverse.com/priva...wpm&pmid=300335 he said he don't want beef *won like 3 or 4 battles by no-shows *he's 14-12 *he's poor so they can't send dollar bills |
u talentless kid simply said ya skills are a MYTH/
he only use mouth to tighten his lips and consume dick/ u tlk madd shyt and say ive been forever duckin shyt/ but like DMX said u really dunno who u fukin wit/ throw punches and grill ya ass like i was george forman/ ya whole shyt built on lies like u the founder of mormans/ whole structure simple in lines and design/ cant have greatness so u tryin steal a piece of my mind/ jus to advanced to inhanced while u keep ya shyt simplistic/ u aint half the man u got guns i drop boms like balistics/ |
lol y u gotta shrink the font...because u cant flow and u strech...not tryin to tlk shyt jus sayin its kinda weak that u cant even drop a full sized rhyme lol..........and yea i dont want no more beef cuz dat shyt is gay....how u gunna tlk shyt when u can see my face....yall little kids is makin this world a crazzy place lol......
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u a soft nigga, i dont' want beef, lol, u should never started, and bitch i always shrink my font but i did it for u this time, the reason i did it for u is so it can match the size of ya dick, lol, i know u gonna ask how i know, ya girl told me, lol, let's let the people vote on this, we uppin muthafuckas
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im white so "nigga" ya way off.....and my girl told u..wow thats corny...u sayin shyt like that u aint startin beef u embarasin urself....wisemen got kids that tlk like they outta the fukin whomb...jus because u like to be tuff on the web dont mean shyt if u wanna tlk shyt go ahead...u wastin ya life though peace ~1~
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lol, damn u lost another battle, whew up ya game kid, now like i said let's let the peeps vote on this so just shut up and let the voting commence, for someone who don't want beef u still running ya mouth, lol
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apology, lol
as u all know by now i don't like soul sickness and never will cause he pissed me off but he thought he was tough when he was talking so much shit but look at this shit, lol, an apology, open sesame
Soul Sickness' apology, lol http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155122 i've been in alot of beef lately, i think i got empire syndrome, lol, hopefully not |
oh yea, we uppin in this bitch
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Voted For: Myth
ok~ myth~good verse overall, flowed well, you had stronger punches then your opponent here, they hit harder, i liked your opener, some decent personals on the name and the thread, my favorite part tho, was your closer, the last two bars were fire, and funny...nice job soul sickness~your verse was good too, nice struc and flow,,but i think you could have come a little stronger here, with more punches, personals, i liked the forman line and the morman line, but you could have geared this towards your opponent more...but nice job both overall......1 |
Voted For: Myth
Myth Got This Hands Down This Couldnt Be More One Sided IN My Point Of View Myth-You Came Hard With Your Punches. Personals were Aight. Metas and Multis along with your wordplay was killin him.Opener And Closer Were Also Hot. Structure Was Right ON And You Had A Hot Verse. Souls Sickness-Your Verse Was Aight. Ive Seen You Write Better. You Flow Was On But Your Punches Were Not Complex You Structure Was Good And Shit But You Just Wrote Shit Son.. No Hate -1 Opener-Myth Closer-Myth Wordplay-Myth Vocab-Myth Structure-Myth Flow-Myth Metas-Myth Multis-Myth Overall Vote- Myth Hot Verse Myth |
Voted For: Myth
ok this vote was brought to you in part by: "B.L.A.'s open mics!!! if you aint crit it,you aint with it" ok heres my vote Myth you win...duh you have nice metafores and wordplay,and this time ur verse was funny,and kept me entertained flow is standard for you too only thing wrong is the word size S.S....the opener has been used against Myth 1000000000000000000000 times its playd to death and your metas need to be setup in a more orignal way "but like DMX said u really dunno who u fukin wit" set it up like this "you unaware of who you fucking with like DMX" be different Myth wins *this is soooooooooooooooo explained* Close captioning to BLA's vote brouth to you in part by: "B.L.A.'s open mic!!!! if you aint crit it then you aint with it" pc |
Voted For: Myth
soul sickness: PLAYED AS SHIT OPENER... god damn... why is it in every battle this guys in "ohhh your skills are a myth" .. why cant people be original -_- .. your vocab came pretty basic to me.. wasnt feelin the flow.. punches were on and off.. some lines were hittin.. others were like... hmm.. myth: Your verse was way more complex... you had some inventive metas.. punches were sort of on and off on this one as well.. but the good ones were hittin harder.. flow was a little stretched but i was feelin it.. jus shorten up ya lines a lil. one |
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