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Kawn Flixx 10-14-04 05:08 PM

B.L.A. vs Soulless
 
Battle Rules:

6 -1o lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

due 20 minutes after check in

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-17-04 at 05:08 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

System 10-14-04 05:35 PM

B.L.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 05:35 PM.

Kawn Flixx 10-14-04 05:44 PM

chec chec chec chec....

300 somethin post.. still your soul couldn't summon to Pro
you aren't even in my stats in fact... you are under my sole
if you lack soul why are you rapping,you happen to know...
that if you battlin a wack rapper..that the mirror havoc will show*
you quote kweli,but battling me aint a beautiful struggle*
you couldn't plan a play to win anyway even while in a huddle
you have eugoly...you aint fooling me,even a fool would see*
you ae never the brightest,your mind speaks of silence*
you couldn't soak talent in a MOVING BEACH,*just retire
because if your soulless,then you won't rap not even in quior


1.in his sig he says he probably battle you or some other WACK rapper
and a mirror havoc means if he battles wack rapper he IS a wack rapper

2.beautiful struggle is a talib kweli album

3. he has a eulogy in his sig
and if he's soulless he's dead

4. and 5.-he says hes the brightest in his sig-
if he can't soak talent in a beach thats moving he's stupid
and the beach is bright lol

6.a quior is a heavenly thing and he's soulless

Kawn Flixx 10-14-04 05:49 PM

can you pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaase

check in??????????????


I made it 20 minutes so we would
freestyle????? come on man

System 10-15-04 01:32 AM

Soulless has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 01:32 AM.

Soulless 10-15-04 01:35 AM

--Explanation--
* B.L.A. is also the expression for bla…. Get it….



We ain‘t playing put-put….and still B comes with miniature-hits
His text is flat….and…. hard to read… just like his signature-is!!!!
Im ‘pinning-the-kid‘,… the Best Around...shit I’ll ‘leave-him-torn‘…
And make RV see the ‘end of him‘.. Like he mooned-the-boards!!!!
You should really show ya record….you must have ‘something-to-mention‘…
Cuz we can all see… that even your name… is ‘just-an-expression’!!!!*
..ya Lyrics are ‘far from the best‘, the kids telling ‘lies like rapid‘….
U drop so damn quick…. My verse is forced to be… ‘Below average‘!!!!

Sonned!!!!!!

Kawn Flixx 10-15-04 04:19 PM

uppin for votes

Kawn Flixx 10-15-04 04:19 PM

uppin for votes

please

FlowIntelligent. 10-15-04 05:28 PM

Voted For: Soulless

Souless:

We ain‘t playing put-put….and still B comes with miniature-hits
His text is flat….and…. hard to read… just like his signature-is!!!!
^^good personal and meta hott opener 8/10
Im ‘pinning-the-kid‘,… the Best Around...shit I’ll ‘leave-him-torn‘…
And make RV see the ‘end of him‘.. Like he mooned-the-boards!!!!
^^good flow and punch 7/10
You should really show ya record….you must have ‘something-to-mention‘…
Cuz we can all see… that even your name… is ‘just-an-expression’!!!!*
^^hott personal best bar 10/10
..ya Lyrics are ‘far from the best‘, the kids telling ‘lies like rapid‘….
U drop so damn quick…. My verse is forced to be… ‘Below average‘!!!!
^^ehh decent closer played concept 5/10

overall: 30/40

B.L.A:

300 somethin post.. still your soul couldn't summon to Pro
you aren't even in my stats in fact... you are under my sole
^^good opener nice punch 7/10
if you lack soul why are you rapping,you happen to know...
that if you battlin a wack rapper..that the mirror havoc will show*
^^hot ass bar..really feeling this 9/10
you quote kweli,but battling me aint a beautiful struggle*
you couldn't plan a play to win anyway even while in a huddle
^^u worded the last bar bad made this bar weak 5/10
you have eugoly...you aint fooling me,even a fool would see*
you ae never the brightest,your mind speaks of silence*
^^ nice wordplay weak punch bad structure 4/10
you couldn't soak talent in a MOVING BEACH,*just retire
because if your soulless,then you won't rap not even in quior
^^ decent closer 6/10

overall: 31/50

soulless pulled this battle out nicely... he had some good punches better concepts and a overall hotter verse

Soulless 10-16-04 12:12 PM

uppin lets get some votes...

drop a link....

Dirty Nigga 10-16-04 12:25 PM

Voted For: Soulless

aight
decent battle
both dropped hot ass punches...
nice flow from both yall, nice vocab
i think souless had the better flow an better personals..

d.l.a, ya unches n metas an everythin was sick, but you wasnt as creative as souless, so i'm votin for soul
no hate yall
just tellin it how i see it
can yall return the fave in my sig?
thanx..

peace

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Soulless 10-16-04 01:31 PM

2-0 me,,,,,

keep votes coming....

L.I. 10-16-04 02:10 PM

Voted For: Soulless

V/ Soulless

He killed it...every bar had a nice meta....BLA tried too hard...dont explain every frigin word in yah spit lmao....get direct punches...Soulless had me laughing the whole time....nice spit....

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Kawn Flixx 10-16-04 06:33 PM

I had to explain my punches cuz
niggas always sayin they don't get shit

uppin

HoPe 10-16-04 11:31 PM

Voted For: Soulless

lol..this was a funny battle...

soull: nyce shyt man.. your was pretty good punch..but honestly..i've seen a lot better

Score:
punch: 7/10..it was funny.. so good job
flow: 9/10 it flowed very well..i liked at alot..but everyoen can flow well..
structure:9/10..pretty good structure..
personal:7/10.. funny.. bout his sig!!

32/40


iight..Bla: your shyt was funny too..but at times i ddin'tget at it right away..

score:
punch:6/10..was alrite.. i've seen alot better ones...
flow: 10/10very nyce flow..better then his!! ;)
personal:7/10 nyce personal..but why does everyone dis the siG?
Structure: 9/10good structure man..it as also better...
31/40

vote: soul

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