Lil Rip vs elusiv g
 

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Old battle close - win

Lil Rip has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 06:01 PM.

Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 06:03 PM.

yo rippa in

i could kill you with a pull of a finger//
cause you ain't shit, just a wanna be power ranger//

yo i kick you once, make you rise like bread, bake by bakers//
kill you, chop your ass up and burry you under a 1,000 acres//

i bet you that think you are all big, and really bad//
but it's sad, the only balls you got are the one's from last night...... when you got T-BAG//

queer ass hoe i told you about that shit//
you "silly faggit dick are for chicks"//

i don't know what to say now cause you've been trampled like dirt//
me and my boys ran train on ya mom last night, and jusst now, I fuck you in this verse//

but i can understand if you get mad at me//
cause i know you got a strong belief about keeping it in the family//

and what's worst, that got to be the truth//
between you and your dad, my dick touches your mom more than both of you//

that was lame but it shoud be enough

Look at your record, its shameful, 6-twenty two
On RV your ass is failin, u shud quit move ur ass to timbukto//

Cos on here, wit your skills, you neva gain nigga respect
Ur ass needs to wake up, ask for a hook-up from sway and tech//

You claim your occupation is "rippin mc' on the mic"
That shit needs 2 b reversed, cos nigga ur skills just aint tight//

Lil Rip, gets ripped quik, wit ma sik, lyrical shit
Ur punk ass, like glass, get broke fast cos nigga your out of your class//

Ima "rip" yo ass outta tha frame and shatter your game
This is tha "TAKEOVER" bitch and your ass is "LAAAMMEE"//

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This was feedback posted for Lil Rip
 

ok...

punches- goes to lil rip
flows- goes to elusiv
multis- elusiv
perosnals- lil rip

overall I liked lil rips lines better

maybe next time elusiv
u were aiight though

This was feedback posted for Elusiv G
 

no one has >20 posts. so no one will be able to vote

This was feedback posted for Elusiv G
 

vote goes to elusive g, mate you had some nice punchesYou claim your occupation is "rippin mc' on the mic"
That shit needs 2 b reversed, cos nigga ur skills just aint tight// ^ that was a nice punch, good multies...Lil Rip, gets ripped quik, wit ma sik, lyrical shit
Ur punk ass, like glass, get broke fast cos nigga your out of your class//there was good multies there, overall elusive you win this cuase of better punches, nicer and more comsistant flow.

lil rip, your shit it a bit dry! i could kill you with a pull of a finger//
cause you ain't shit, just a wanna be power ranger//
^^^^^^enough said, flow was crook, punchs were soft, overall a pretty weak verse!

please return the favour and vote on one of the battles below, pz

psss, you fucked up the voting thingy, it says minimun post to vote... >20,

upppin
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This was feedback posted for Elusiv G
 

Dame I had my vote done but the system was trying
to say I had under 20 posts lmao....

Anyway I not gonna write out what I did before.

Elu come nice one this battle in every department
killed it with the word play on the last two barz
sicck close man. He had dope word play...

Lil Rip, gets ripped quik, wit ma sik, lyrical shit
Ur punk ass, like glass, get broke fast cos nigga your out of your class//

Flow dope with hard hitting punches and a few personals.

Rip not on the level I liked...
but i can understand if you get mad at me//
cause i know you got a strong belief about keeping it in the family//
but it was a bit predictable... didn't have any wordplay
so your verse lacked complexity...

Vote ~ EG

I still can't vote WTF!!!

You need to find needs to vote on this shit man....

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