poison vs dflow
 

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-17-04 at 08:35 PM

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dflow has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 08:35 PM.

yo my plan be self fabricated /leave ur frame deflated/my steel leave ya ass like cheese chopped up and grated/shoot ya whole block up and just skated/i kno u must hate it/like long commercials i get u irritated/but how u a real gangsta/when ya chains plated?/get ya brain weighted/filled wit lead/have ya ma lookin at an empty bed/get shot up/cause my gats envy lead / right hook got u turnin heads/roll up my sleeves and rip u to shreds/ my rap affiliation is to the point where i kno/ ur not duplicatin/got me wit no time to be wastin//im unpatient /throw pussys like u into walls like insallation/leave ya block wit a lower population/no exaggeratin/watch my shells melt u like radiation/leave ya face twisted like a bad operation/comin out wit flows so hott ud die a dehydration/get hurt and it might lead to strangulation/its like a combination of lead penetratin and leavin u in the arms of satan/send u on a permanent vacation/so theres no need for explanations/ watch ya soul rise to higher elevations/ my reflect/is for my gat to eject/leave on the welcome mat on ya steps/ im erasin ya breath/its like ur racing for death/turn u red man/ no relation to meth/spot u like a dalmation wit my tech/have u like khia/my neck/ my back/break both in 2 seconds flat/no time to chitter chat/a whole lime/bitch im more bitter than that/lyrical combat/all find where u work at/ put a price on ya hed like a fur cap/my whole plan be purfack

poison has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 04:30 PM.

poison has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 04:31 PM.

yo u can never flow/
so imma make u admit that im the sickest rappa u ever know/
u probly give more BLOW jobs than a coke dealer/
ur rhymes aint possible just like a cigarette smoke healer/
u probly walk with 30 dolla kicks on/
and get wiped on/
knocked out cold and pissed on/
yo poison is the livest cat/
im gettin stacks of cash while u askin ppl "do u want fries with that?"

Voted For: poison

dflow
what the fuck?, no structure what so ever, write ur lines down the page, no flow, no multis, no wordplay, none of ur punches connected, no good personals

poison
decent structure, decent flow, no multis, no good wordplay, attempted punches, no good personals

Overall
neither had multis, neither had wordplay, neither had good personals, poison had the better structure, the better flow, and more attempted punches, so basing off of that, poison gets my vote

VOTE - POISON

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This was feedback posted for poison
 

poison did u just bit big L, lol what a joker, fuck outta here dawg

Voted For: dflow

yo dflow took it on this one, good metaphors and word choice

poison i loved your last line, kinda sounds familar though kinda like big l, stop being a fucking homo and make up your own lines.