Raphael vs Still_Remain
 

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6 - 24 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

TOPIC-Love you call it?

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Still_Remain has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 11:31 AM.

Rick McSlick has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 08:15 PM.

"Love you call it" she dumped me because of my zits...
I can't help puberty acne attacks...or my ADHD fits...
I want somebody to love, someone to make me feel secure...
Now, I'm obliviated emotionally, left in misery, feeling obsucre...
Nobody to come help me dissolve the pain, noone tells me to sit and cry on theit shoulder...
My agony, weighs me down uncontrollably, as if I was holding a boulder...
"love you call it" I like I was sentenced to death...
But just banished, not cared for, steady decreasement in health...
Thoughts of suicide in my brain, the thought of her makes me go insane...
If I have to bear seeing her face, tears would pour down my cheeks like rain...
She just left me, in misery, not realizing whate she had miserable deed she had performed...
My parents, were worried sick,not knowing what was wrong with me, they had not been informed...
"Love you call it?" I'd rather be chewed into bits...
Then have my neck sliced, and my carcass thrown into pits...

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