:::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..::: vs Intensify Effect
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Dont Duck...
You Gotta Battle Me Sometime..

Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 10-18-04 at 09:13 AM

Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in.

:::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..::: has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 09:22 AM.

its about time this fuck battled me................
okay, okay, here goes.....................

everytime i called you out ya ducked n got offline...
fiend ya so addicted to crack u got a pac an tim roth shrine!..
my texts'll make u blind but thats good cause ya raps are ass..
i'll brake ya rhymes like glass...
an with just one of my punches ya seein double vision..
you should know never to try rhyming without proper hip hop supervision..
i'm on a one man mission to help intensify your flows effect...
but theres no help for you like a penis that cant errect!..
livin off past glory, ''violent types still on fire'' keep ya mouth ''canned''..
i'm some unsigned hype stompin you out an signin the partician to get u banned!
i'll be damned if this dwarf gets the win...
like the afgan soldiers your gon go thru torture as i stick a axe to ya foreskin..!


aight.....
explanations..
everytime i called you out ya ducked n got offline...
fiend ya so addicted to crack u got a pac an tim roth shrine!..
^^^
he always ducked when i accepted his called out n got ofline..
an tim roth n pac were crackheads in gridlock'd, if ya smart enuff you'll figure that out..

livin off past glory, ''violent types still on fire'' keep ya mouth ''canned''..
i'm some unsigned hype stompin you out an signin the partician to get u banned
^^^
he still thinks VT are on fire...
stomp him out cause he claimin fire an there is a partician for him to be banned..

shit hahaha
i didnt mean to drop the verse twice, ahhh well...
when ya ready effect, drop ya verse

how many bars u went so i can match ya...............

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-04 05:42 PM.

dopeman,
diss me?.. said i been ducking.. but i've been waiting for ya skill's to rech a settlement...
cuz i'll murder ya drop befor it happens,.. like shell' poping stomach.. during a fetal development... *ouch*
Don't care if you think you ill, your punches can touch me?.... hardly..
Wouldn't put ya "nuts on the table"... if you were hostin a... "fuckin party"...
Wanna ride my dick and battle ? Well,.... I bet you'll fall brother....
But please loosen up ya grip dawg,... ya hardness bearly fills a extra small rubber.... *ha*
im rippen your ligemints in three N creamating the Remains Of ya physical.. basic....
so stop quickly ' My verbal Abuse is Metal bound like Rappers with Braces....
your more Herbish then "empire" in a pink slip, dog what type of Brain Patterns Are yours?....
your executed ' no props ', left hangin like Hinges on Large Doors...
Im so Ruthless ' I'll switch your hearts Blood supply with Mental Confusion
Sending simple Illusions.. ' you get crippled an booted like handicap kids kicken an feuden..BITCH!!! *ha*

BANG-BANG-EARLY.....

* P.S i had more but ia int know how many bars u went so i cut my verse short..... *

good luck family... much respect...

hmmm, you pre wrote that yea?
aight
if u get the win
i want a rematch so i can work on it an not drop the first thing that came to my head....

upp'in this battle for some votes.....................

Voted For: intensify effect

close battle


Dopeman: once again ya stuctures fucked, fix it cause it can lose u battles sometimes, liked ya opener, punches were there and were decent but weren't hitting that hard, flow was kinda off, some ok meta's, like the play off his name, some nice personals, liked the personal about the banned petition, ya closer could have been alot better, 5/10



Intensify Effect: good verse all around, tigh opener, liked the nuts and party line lol, the rubber line was hot too, basically ya whole verse was nice, punches were hitting harder then dopeman's, tight meta's was there, structure was kinda crazy, flow was on and off, good worplay and creativity, fave lines was the basic and braces lines, good closer, 7.5/10



vote - Intensify Effect


return the honest votes, battles are in my sig, no hate

upp'in this battle.....................................

upp'in this battle.....................................

This was feedback posted for intensify effect
 

both of yall stuctures are fucked and intensify effect you got a fucked streched lines...but were tight 1 jsut feed

Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::

effect yo flow wuz nice da structure wuz fukked in parts an da punz were wea but da personals were nice an da opener wuz tite but u didnt have a good closer but dopeman yo flow wuz nice and yo structre wuz good u started off whakked az fukk but yo verse got better dat canned line wuz hella tite so imz votin fo u return da favor maaaaaneee!

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^^^^ upp'in for more votes mang.......
and explain ya shit better then the guy above me plez.....