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L.I. vs Malefic
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Malefic has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 05:52 PM.
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L.I. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 05:55 PM.
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You battling me is no use,....L.I.....No'Show and save ur abuse-
Ur records a fluke, shit your last battle was a loss to G: Duece It's true, Your on a comeback mission, but ur punch? It's missing And Dopest Crew? The Definition? L.I. even allowed Empires admission! It's hard to believe, for me, that you can claim to "watch over RV" Cus vet's can read. And see, That I'm 10 times above whatever u feed. Indeed, L.I, You couldn't rap tight if you were labell'd wit Reynolds The only way U spit nice is if I'm drugged and u switched up our Dentals Whoa!..Your the centerfold....for what it takes to get vote's on poll's- Congrats! But I'll be damned if Malefic's gonna fall 5-0 to a 15 yearold. |
Swing as much as you want.. ur impacts as small as a needle..
Shit, I'd tell you to do your thing.. but gay marriage is illegal... Proud of beating you?.. nah, just too simple, think outta the frame... Only thing dope bout you are the third and sixth letters of your name... You obviously had no shot at the win.. now kid, dont get disheartened... I almost got siked for this battle.. till i remembered its only Carson... I'll use another homo punch on your ass.. and this one's essential... This guy handles balls all day.. so he can say he has fundamentals... Way to go kid.. you worked hard and earned the Most Wack Medal... Son, I'll even close it like this.. . . . . . . & remain above your skill level!!... |
upping.............. .
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This was feedback posted for L.I.
nice battle hea..
to bad i cant vote tho.. get this shit uppin.. Peace.. |
This was feedback posted for L.I.
LOl... jusst checking this battle out and the poll
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Voted For: Malefic
L.I: Swing as much as you want.. ur impacts as small as a needle.. Shit, I'd tell you to do your thing.. but gay marriage is illegal... Good opener, gay lines are played but this one was a lil' creative, 3/5 Proud of beating you?.. nah, just too simple, think outta the frame... Only thing dope bout you are the third and sixth letters of your name... Haha this was dope, a little self-glorifying but you pulled it off with a good personal, 4/5 You obviously had no shot at the win.. now kid, dont get disheartened... I almost got siked for this battle.. till i remembered its only Carson... Malefic=Carson??? If so, punch was funny, 3/5 I'll use another homo punch on your ass.. and this one's essential... This guy handles balls all day.. so he can say he has fundamentals... This was better than your last gay line, more creative, but the punch wasn't that hard, 3/5 Way to go kid.. you worked hard and earned the Most Wack Medal... Son, I'll even close it like this.. & remain above your skill level!!... Self-glorification, and the punch didn't hit very hard, 2/5 Total: 15/25 Malefic: You battling me is no use,....L.I.....No'Show and save ur abuse- Ur records a fluke, shit your last battle was a loss to G: Duece Alright opener, punch was average, good set up with the first line, 3/5 It's true, Your on a comeback mission, but ur punch? It's missing And Dopest Crew? The Definition? L.I. even allowed Empires admission! Damn, good multis and vocab usage, good personal too, 4/5 It's hard to believe, for me, that you can claim to "watch over RV" Cus vet's can read. And see, That I'm 10 times above whatever u feed. A little self-glorifying, but multis satyed consistent, and you came with another good personal, 3.5/5 Indeed, L.I, You couldn't rap tight if you were labell'd wit Reynolds The only way U spit nice is if I'm drugged and u switched up our Dentals Another s.g line, but you had good wordplay in here and a good punch overall, 3/5 Whoa!..Your the centerfold....for what it takes to get vote's on poll's- Congrats! But I'll be damned if Malefic's gonna fall 5-0 to a 15 yearold. Line was a little stretched, but still good multis and yet another good personal, 3/5 Total: 16.5 Winner: Malefic, with better punches, good wordplay, and better personals. No hate L.I, you came in close. Return the vote to a link in my sig, hoenst explained votes only... |
This was feedback posted for L.I.
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...........:):D:):D:)....
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Voted For: L.I.
ha ha ha. very nice battle. i liked this one. both had sik verses. malefic-good use of personals. i liked the lines about attackin his crew and about the zip loc bag. u had a good flow to it and ur lines were even also. i wasnt really feelin it too much though. i think u coulda cam harder with some better punches. overall 6.5/10 LI-sick verse. defintely killed him. you used a lot of personals which were pretty funny. i liked your bar about his name and you had a pretty good opener. your closer was funny. you attacked him in every line and i definitely think u won this. overall 8/10 vote-LI |
Voted For: Malefic
lol..good one!!! malefic: good verse man..nyce persnoals n good punches!!it made me laught almost the whole time! Flow:8/10 it was very good flow, and made it easy to understand!! punch: 8/10haha, very nyce punches, but full of personals!! personals: 9/10..lmao..all of em made me laugh... structure: 9/10...it almost looks like a square! 34/40 L.I.: damn man..for a guy dats ill at topicals.. u pretty good at text.. damn. u are better then me lol.. score: flow: 8/10urs flowed pretty good...dats good! but at times jst didn't flow so well :( structure:8/10 yea pretty good structure..but everyone can do dat!! :) Personals:3/10..you only had one personal..n it wasn't even good... atleast u used a personal..dats why u got a 3... punch: 7/10 alrite..u had okay punches.. but not ur best...actaully dis is first text battle i've seen of urs... so i mean.. I've seen better.. total:26/40 vote..malefic |
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This was feedback posted for Malefic
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Voted For: Malefic
Malefic nice personals the whole drop was like one big personal ya punches were nice and original thats a plus ya structure was good u had some nice Multi's and Meta's The personals and Punches helped u lotz Li i was especting alot more from u man Ya structure was ok ya punches werent really original and didnt hit ya personals werent really there like they should ya Multi's and Meta's werent really there eitheir kinda seemed like u was jus talkin this go's 2 Malefic much props kid Li u gonna have 2 bring it harder than that 4 sumone thats supposed 2 be considered a Vet Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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