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Hit Em Up On Archaelogist
Destroy And Rebuild
The Warning Get Ya Wig Split.. leave the wrists slit of Nitwits Arch gotta stick his tongue in Revokes Ass to 'Spit Shit! U Beat Me in 2 lines...Ill murder u Unlimited He Feeling Himself Like His Hand And Dick Are Intimate! Beef Is Costly..This Creep? Killing Em Softly...Sleep... Someone Wake Em Like A Cup Of Coffee..An Get Em Off Me! Prem beat u But He Made A Mistake..Dis Champ Is So Fake When He "Drop Gold Bars" Its Just proof he Cant "Hold Weight"! U'll Neva "Blow Up" Pretend to be "Da Bomb" An Get Raped U Couldnt Be A 'Super Mod' if U Logged On With A Cape! Let the Machete Scrap..U CornBall Acter Like Chevy Chase.. All that extra water just equate to Arch being 'HeavyWeight' Fake Champ of RV? Im Switching My RapSite... Prems bar Had Em 'Go Up In Smoke' Like Fumes From Crack pipes! So Act Right! Serving Up Niggas Brown Blue Black White... Sit In my Throne..And Crush these 'Pussies' Like a Fat Dike! Those Punchline Leagues Is A joke.. Thats Just Reality.... Only Place u Crown A Heavy Weight Champ On A Technicality... U Not Even Moderately A Decent Moderate..U Rap Shitty! Far From King of this 'Jungle'..More Like Tigre From Rap City! A Host that Like pretending..You A Spinoff oF Revoke U Might Ass Well Go Elope...He Got His Dick Up Em Ya Throat! RIP to Strobe....Voice of reason... Only Mod I Respected... Cuz He Did His Job..And Arch Is Just Concerned With His Record.. Plus He Got So Many Groupies (D/R) It'll Make The 'Stars Drool' That Been Riding His Dick So Long....They All Carpool! (Arch: Comon Kids..In Ya Car seat we gotta another battle to steal) End It Now..^^^^^^Thats Filler 2 Me ..I Do That on Lunch Break.. |
haha! hope i aint offend ya arch d/r's but truth is truth
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Dope... good flow, vocab, punches all around dope diss... keep it up and drop some feed on my open mic
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now he tryna ban me for stupid shit........an he wonder y i dont shut my mouth to him
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now I aint big on disses becuz everyone got sumtin they can get cracked on for, but this was a nice drop, nice length and number on lines, good punches, jus a tight rhyme. Good drop and keep elevatin.
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not even uppin fa beef.......just opinions..............
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dat was da hottest dis i've seen in here yet.10/10.keep up da good work.dat shit was funny too.even my moms read it and was crackin up and she hates rap.
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nive man. lovin it. lol
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^^^^^hahahahahaha!!tell ya moms i said thanks....good looking on the feedback |
me man i did. koo.
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ima up it this time for artistic critisism............................
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lol thats wot had me crackin up^^^^ :laugh: anyway tight diss dawg you brought the heat, nice flow but most importantly in a diss nice punches n some gud personals....you'd av been beta battlin him wiv that though instead of just an open mic...pz hot will ya hit up the open mic in my sig...called 'confession'...wud be appreciated..thanx |
cant critize it..
it was a hot diss personals were right on point....... arch must be kickin himself cause he got murderd by you here an by me in the battle lol but back to the topic at hand, the personals were right on point an the wordplay n bars connected...8/10, this was a real hard hittin diss can u leave feed on my newest open mic dope man? links in the sig peace |
oh n thanx for the mention...lol
yeh i was abit hard fuckin done by...i shud be champ :huh: well 1 more week n i'll be bac to take bac wots mine... hit my open mic dawg...in my sig...do it...lol pz |
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