9th degree vs Tricky Wretch
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines.
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-16-04 at 03:32 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Old/expired battle close - win

9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-16-04 03:08 PM.

Tricky Wretch has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-16-04 03:09 PM.

I aint battled for a while.. next time you challange me make it a day before hand so i can get some personal's , I just dont know you but peace.

10.

It's hopeless tryna beat me? 9th you know it's the end
...Cos ya punchlines miss me more.. Than my exgirlfriend!
The champ never was gone... I always around, bitch..
I'll have this you beat down, like it was banned from soundclick!
What the FUCK is the point? You know you wont win this..
Ya mom? I Unzip her pant's faster than Window's Winzip..
Fuck this homosexual bitch, Thinking MM isn't great?
He's so gay.. Robin hood.. Could'nt get his arrow straight.
I play trick's with word's & I even play trick's with whores.
........I'm the hardest mothafucka... In my bed with yours!

Fuck not being abble to edit :cussing:

The champ never was gone... I was always around, bitch..
I'll have you beat down, like it was banned from soundclick!


Incase you thought WTF? that line was retarded You & This?

FYI kids, Tricky Wretch is Mental Murderous' alias...

You got no flava, so I'll spit now, it's time you were fed
You out of ya Mental, that's funny judgin' by the size of your head
The lines that I've said will murder this murderess, you drop crap, guy
Prolly can't fight neither, but nobody could tell if you got a black eye!
That's why, you should've declined, your spit'll be worthless
This guy called Boys 2 Men 'cuz he thought it was a delivery service
African cat, this battle's like his homeland, he got "sunned"
Got shot down like Top Gun, on infomercials beggin' for adop-shun
You look like Bubba from Forrest Gump breeded with a Hatian sow
Account 36240, send him your donations now...
His pic's at the bottom

Peep the wordplay or don't vote, good luck bro...

lol, funny that kid's know everything about me...
Are you one of socrates buddies?
Good Luck though . . V0o0o0tes.

Voted For: 9th Degree

9th:

punch: 6/10you had way more punch 9th, cuz basiclly that guy jst sed he was better wen not..
flow: 8/10 yours flowed pretty good...
vocab: 3/10 you shoudl use better next time...
total: 17/30 (not good):(


Tricky:
punch: 5/10 blah!! wasn't good at all..u went wit it like a newb..
flow:8/10 your flow was alrite..not good though...
vocab: 3/10, your vocab was weak...

total:16/30..

9th, you barely won this one.. jst do better next time..

vote: 9th

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

^ That vote was stupid.. it made no sense you gave him a 6/10 and said he had way more punche's than me then you gave me a 5/10..? please dont vote here if your a moron.

Please breakdown your vote's..

Your a fucking dickrider what a miniute

Look

punch: 6/10you had way more punch 9th, cuz basiclly that guy jst sed he was better wen not..
flow: 8/10 yours flowed pretty good...
vocab: 3/10 you shoudl use better next time...
total: 17/30 (not good)


Tricky:
punch: 5/10 blah!! wasn't good at all..u went wit it like a newb..
flow:8/10 your flow was alrite..not good though...

NOTICE how he give's our flow BOTH 8 and give's him a GOOD comment and me a BAD comment.. & that wasn't even explained.

Voted For: Tricky Wretch

very good battle

9th Degree-overall nice verse. you had a nice personal at the end. good closer. your opener wasnt too great but it was oka. your flow was okay. there was nothing wrong with your strucutre. the only thing i didnt like about your verse was the fact that you used that boyz 2 men line. i heard a joke like that about michael jackson so it wasnt very original. overall 8/10


Trick Wretch-pretty decent opener. better than 9th degree's openeer. i like the wordplay with the soundclick line. that was kinda funny. you had a good flow and structure was even. no streched out lines or nothing of that sort. your closer wasnt as good as 9th though. and you didnt really have any personals. overall 8/10


a kinda even battle i thought. i based it on originality and creativity. 9th degree had some good lines but that bar about boyz 2 men really killed it so im voting for Tricky Wretch

Ayo Mental I'ma go holla at strobe and get dq'd...

Voted For: Tricky Wretch

Both of you was good.. but some were kinda wack
(th: ok you had an iight verse but not that good.. you had some flaw... definatly you didnt have good flow.. duno why hope said it was good.....ya structre was iight... you had good punches there were iight... though ya personals wasnt much of a threat there...some of your lnies were forced like the 3rd line... and some didnt connect.... and the last bar didnt rhyme.. wordplay was iight though

Tricky Wrench: first ya shit was good... one sided battles kind of... you had good flow which was better... also ya personals were not as good but it was iight.. nice strucutre... punches were funny and good.....yours was much stronger that 9ths verse and it was overall better.......

Vote is wrench for a better verse and more original with better punches and flow...

This was feedback posted for Tricky Wretch
 

Upin....................!.........................

Voted For: Tricky Wretch

You got no flava, so I'll spit now, it's time you were fed
You out of ya Mental, that's funny judgin' by the size of your head
^^nicely worded/personal....7.5/10
The lines that I've said will murder this murderess, you drop crap, guy
Prolly can't fight neither, but nobody could tell if you got a black eye!
^^ok punch...7.5/10
That's why, you should've declined, your spit'll be worthless
This guy called Boys 2 Men 'cuz he thought it was a delivery service
^^nice i liked this...7.5/10
African cat, this battle's like his homeland, he got "sunned"
Got shot down like Top Gun, on infomercials beggin' for adop-shun
^^koo wordplay/nice punch(personal).....8.5/10
You look like Bubba from Forrest Gump breeded with a Hatian sow
Account 36240, send him your donations now...
His pic's at the bottom
^^nice idea but wordin was a bit off, ok closer....6.5/10
.37.5/50
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It's hopeless tryna beat me? 9th you know it's the end
...Cos ya punchlines miss me more.. Than my exgirlfriend!
^^nice opener....8/10
The champ never was gone... I always around, bitch..
I'll have this you beat down, like it was banned from soundclick!
^^1st line blah...2nd was a good recovery...7.5/10
i only say that cuz of the (the champ never was gone)
What the FUCK is the point? You know you wont win this..
Ya mom? I Unzip her pant's faster than Window's Winzip..
^^blah...you kno this wasnt good...!..6.5/10
Fuck this homosexual bitch, Thinking MM isn't great?
He's so gay.. Robin hood.. Could'nt get his arrow straight.
^^lmao...this was koo....8.5/10
I play trick's with word's & I even play trick's with whores.
........I'm the hardest mothafucka... In my bed with yours!
hmmm this was aight...not hard hittin though...meh..7/10
37.5/50
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hmm,aight this was real close 9th came with alot of personals that were good but not hittin as hard punches, but still personals that made ya laugh.....
mm,good punches that were hittin hard not personal but the hit harder then 9th's did, this is 1 of those battle that you need to know what wins battles to be able to drop a good vote...(harder punches win battles)..so it was close but mm takes it for hader punches...srry nice...you came nice but ya punches jus werent as hard man...